Sink or Swim!

It was Labor Day 1969,1

My mother her friend and I prepared to go to Bear Mountain.2

Everyone was excited because James, my mother's beau 3

had just purchased a brand new Deuce and A Quarter.4

Eager to get on the road, we locked up the apartment and started5

on our way.6

An hour later we arrived at Bear Mountain.7

I was thrilled because kids were everywhere and the place was jumping.8

After finding a parking space we settled at a cozy spot near the pool.9

The swimming pool was awesome peaking at sixteen feet.10

Children were limited to the shallow part of the pool.11

I was determined to learn how to swim because my buddies back home12

knew how.13

After eating and digesting a light lunch I ventured out to the pool.14

My mother cautioned me not to stray off too far.15

She gave me specific instructions not to leave the children's area16

of the pool.17

Of course I had other plans.18

How could I learn to swim in shallow water?19

All summer I stood on the sidelines as a spectator while my peers20

enjoyed pool games at the local center.21

I was going to learn how to swim if it killed me.22

Starting at the children's end of the pool I gained courage to enter23

the adults section.24

Upon arriving I dipped my foot into the ten feet water level.25

Feeling cocky I submerged my entire body being careful to stay 26

near the edge.27

After watching seasoned swimmers jump off the high diving board 28

into sixteen feet, I convinced myself that I could do it too.29

My mission was clear and nothing would deter me.30

After the diver performed a two and a half jump into the pool 31

I climbed up the ladder into the valley of no return.32

Eyes closed and heart racing I jumped off the high diving board33

attempting to emulate the previous divers.34

Landing head first into sixteen feet of water I descended like a35

ton of bricks.36

My body plunged downward as I gasped for air.37

Now delirious I kicked my feet and moved my arms to no avail.38

Eyes wide open my focus was directed atop where the water sparkled39

in the sunlight.40

A million images flashed across my mind as my life seemed to slip away.41

Suddenly, a quiet voice spoke, "be calm and your body will surface."42

No longer frantic but serene my body shot up like lightning to the top.43

Relieved I headed back to the pools edge a distance of twenty feet.44

My ordeal seemed to last an eternity when in fact moments only passed.45

I remained calm not to appear in danger knowing my mother would kill me46

if alerted.47

To my amazement an elderly gentlemen who had been watching complimented48

my dive.49

Smiling inwardly I acknowledged peering into the eyes of death being 50

rescued by fate.51

After that traumatic experience I emerged a swimmer.52

Satisfied I never divulged my secret until years later. 53

Author notes

This is a true story of my experience learning how to swim at age 11. This was obviously a risky way to teach oneself how to swim.  Kids, oh what foolish things they do!
I hope you enjoyed it. P.S. don't try this at home!

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  • darell
    November 8, 2004
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    Thank you so much DeBracey. I loved your comments and agree with
    your analogy. Sometimes in life we must take the plunge without knowing where we will land. I enjoyed that moment in my life throughly. In fact it increased my faith in an unseen creator who watches over us. Thanks again and I hope you learn how to swim properly. lol!


  • ca ne fait rien
    November 5, 2004
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    I loved this write- I knew what was going to happen, but that was the point of it, it was all in the telling. However, what I loved most was that someone else did this, survived, blagged it out so that Mum wouldn't find out, worse fate than drowning, that! I wonder if the story is symbolic of a general approach to life, lol. I once jumped in at the deep end- struggled to get to the side, and never did learn to swim properly. I still do it, metaphorically. I envy you for your graceful swallow dive!

  • darell
    October 27, 2004
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    Yes, Joan you are absolutely right. I would not have met you are my sweetie Avril. Thank God for having angel's watching over
    me. I guess I did take a big chance. Sometimes you win and sometimes we lose. Life is so unpredictable but amazing nonetheless! Thanks again Tinkerbell for your support!

  • darell
    October 27, 2004
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    LOL! Everything you said is true but gosh Avril! You make me seem ancient. When I wrote this story I did'nt realize how long ago it must seem to many viewer's. Anyway,I thank you for your wonderful compliments and continued support. You are the best!
    Edited on Oct 27, 4:45 p.m. because ''.


  • angelica
    October 27, 2004
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    Darell, you're gamer than I am, I have always been frightened of the water, especially after being pushed and sat on so many time. I always had to sit on the sidelines as all my friends enjoyed themselves, it's not much fun is it? A very good true story, I'm glad you didn't drown, otherwise I would not have met my Peter pan and diamond would not have met her Prince Charming Love you my dear friend~joan

  • Diamond
    October 26, 2004
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    An amazing leap of faith. Excellent Write!

    It must have been great growing up in the 60's, so many events occured around that period. Richard Nixon was the 37th president of the U.S., the Woodstock festival, Neil Armstrong took his first step on the moon and declared "That's one small step for man, one giant leap for mankind". It was also the year when you made your courageous but risky leap of the diving board. You took a chance and it paid off for you. You must have had an angel keeping watch over you, thank God. If your mother only knew what you attempted, her heart would have been in her hands, then she would spank that behind for you. I suppose that's how life is sometimes, you have to take chances and pray that everything turns out for the better. I would hate to think what may have happened if you hadn't listened to the voice that spoke to you and told you to remain calm. Thank God you emerged a swimmer after all. Great write Darell, the words flowed easily and the details were amazing. Well done, I felt as though I was reading an excerpt from a novel. You skills knows no bounds. Keep on writing giving us more of your amazing talent.

    All my love,

    Avril
    Edited on Oct 26, 8:49 p.m. because ''.

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