They turned from the mirror and each other’s reflections to look directly at one another, their laughter quickly fading as each realized that in another time and another place perhaps they could truly have been friends, perhaps lovers, but not here, not now, not ever.
A contest entry
- : Take a Second and Come In! (Read it ALL or do not enter!) by Taylor Renee.
500 points, ended January 6, 2008, 48 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
-
Um. This is either the beginning of a tragedy or a ramantic comedy. Either way, I want to know what happens next!
-
cool begining, but very short.=)
beginning: 3, language: 3, plot: 3, ending: 3, dialog: 3, characters: 3.
Adding your comment:
