He made us late again!1
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Catalina was trying to get dressed having just showered for a night out. Her boyfriend Jono had other ideas pinching her naked ass as she bent over to pick up a skirt. She slaps his hand away and says “please don’t, I promised Audrey we wouldn’t be late to have a birthday drink with her”.5
With an angry glint in his eye, Jono acts quickly, grabs her and throws her a little too violently down on the bed. Why this switch on occasion goes off in Jono, no one knows.6
She had only just managed to get her skirt on he relished in this and sunk his teeth down on her already erect nipple. He pushed them together against his hard cock and let their soft plumpness massage him. She resisted but knew there was no point. Her hands squeezed his legs and ass, she whimpered, “don’t tease just fuck me, I’m dripping for you right now”.7
Even though he did as she begged and rammed himself into her warmth he still roughly pushed her down, in a cruel manner said “you didn’t even want me, so don’t tell me when I will fuck you”. His thrusts came hard and so fast Catalina could not keep up, she opened herself as wide as she could go as her muscles began to tighten against him, she wanted to feel every last bit.
In her pleasure, she cries out “you are my fucking animal”.8
Jono impatiently flips her over and onto her knees, brings her towards him and starts the ride again. Cat screams out her orgasm as he squirts his sweet stuff all over her face and tits, but
Her cloud nine feeling is taken away in almost an instant when Jono walks out, no cuddle or kiss just “babe, get dressed we‘re late”.
She sighs as she gets up and thinks ‘fucking typical of him’.9
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Good idea
and with a little more action/develoment I would believe they were late.....
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this is somethhing, I have always wanted to come back to and develop..as you say
You commenting on it now, reminded me, so THANKS
I am in the middle of a couple of poems, but I am not going to forget and hope you come back and visit soon
Cindy
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nice
Hey sis, just read your short story and i enjoyed it, not all men are like that but most of them are, nice work, can't wait to read more of your stuff when i get the time, luv ya sis x -
Typical men! LOL I dont have personal experience with that, but I have heard from friends about that happeneing! Stupid boys!
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LOL great read and an oh so typical man. Get him a quickie then it's like they just go back into another world.
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I know I am reading this very late and I lots to catch up on, so here are my thoughts, better late then never....
I liked this idea about a quickie, even if he were a bit rough, she took it for what it was and kinda enjoyed I thought. Typical man though to have no contact once he was done.
Good job all round.
Sarah.
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That was a fun little story. It could have been fleshed out a little more, I think, but maybe the story is a quickie because it is describing a quickie!
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Hi there, thanks for your comment
It was meant to be a quickie, short story type thing
Happy New Year
Cindy
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okay.......I know this is erotica, but that was just distasteful! If you're going to write a story like this, you should build it up, so when the sex scene actually happens, the reader appreciates it more, and it has a better effect on them. I give you 3/5.=)
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Well first of all, thank you for your honest opinion
I am a very skilled erotica writer who does have experience in building things up etc. This particular piece was written for a contest on another site where the guidelines wanted a short full on story. So yeah
But again thank you
Cindy
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