Oh Hope

I tried to start a conversation with you
I felt a little stupid
If you had wanted to talk
you would have said something
Right?
So instead I stayed silent as I usually do
Hoping that someone (cupid)
would help my jaw unlock
Maybe I could have this one thing
I might1

The moment passed
I hate when that happens
I thought I might never hear your voice
I started to walk away
There's nothing I could do
No hope
I judge things too fast
It's a fault, I imagine
I was acting like there wasn't a choice
Then I heard you say
"Can I come with you?"
Oh. Hope

Author notes

I thought this was kind of cute. It's an odd style of poetry, I admit. I was trying to make it flow sort of like I was just talking to myself, but at the same time I wanted it all to rhyme. I'll probably edit a bit, later.

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  • SaintSeaShell
    December 23, 2007
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    I think this was very sweet! I love the way it ended. I was hoping it would end like that.