Christmas In The Leaf Village(Final Part)

Christmas In the Leaf Village(Final Part)1

Naruto opened his eyes.His vision was blurry at first but it was clear.Naruto sat up.Naruto looked around.He was in his room."I'm in my room,"Naruto said.Naruto got out of his behind and went over to the window close to his bed.He pulled it open.It was morning.It was snowing still.All you could here was the birds chirping."The future Hokage is awake everyone!,"Naruto yelled.2

"Keep it down you knuckle head,"somebody said."Hey I'll have to protect you one day.I remeber that!,"Naruto yelled back to whoever."Naruto your finally awake,"someone said.Naruto turned behind him.It was the Pervy Sage."What the,how the,"Naruto said."Your awareness isn't very good is it,"the Pervy Sage said."What are you doing here?,"Naruto asked."I thought I would come and check on you because,you know at the party you blacked out?,"the Pervy Sage answered.3

"Party?Oh I remember.I tried to get Sakura to kiss me,"Naruto said."Yeah and Hinata kissed you,"the Pervy Sage said."Oh yeah I remember,"Naruto said."It seems like Hinata likes you Naruto,"the Pervy Sage said with a sly smile."Know she doesn't,"Naruto said."What?She kissed you though.How do you explain that?,"the Pervy Sage said."She probably didn't know what she was doing.She was out of it,"Naruto said.Oh my god.Nothing gets through to this kid,the Pervy Sage thought.4

"Ah.come on lets get this day started.We got to go see Sakura in the hospital,"the Pervy Sage said."Sakura in the hospital?oh,wait it's all starting to come back to me.Hinata did sixty four palms on Sakura,"Naruto said."Yeah,"the Pervy Sage said."How could she be in the hospital.I survived Neji's sixty four palms,"Naruto said."Do you forget Sakura is a girl,"the Pervy Sage said."Oh yeah,"Naruto said."Come on now,"the Pervy Sage said.Naruto put on his orange and blue jacket and zipped it up.Naruto went to his closet and put it on some pants over the pants he had on."What are you doing?,"the Pervy Sage asked."It's cold outside.I'm dressing warm,"Naruto said.Naruto and the Pervy Sage walked out of the house and onto the street covered with snow.5

They walked in silience for awhile until Naruto broke the silience."So how did you know what happened at the party.I never saw you,"Naruto said."I never entered the party.I decided I didn't want to make a scene.I paid one of your comarades to give me information on the party.The big scene Hinata made was perfect research,"the Pervy Sage said.Naruto spotted Choji across the street counting some cash he had in his hand.Choji was saying aloud,"I'm going to a all you can eat buffet!.""And who took me home yesterday.Why didn't I end up in the hospital?,"Naruto asked.6

"Some Chunin carried you to the hospital but the doctor said it wasn't that serious and said you needed some rest so they dropped you off in your bed,"the Pervy Sage said.They came up on a hospital.They walked in the hospital and up to the front desk.A nurse was sitting at the front desk."Were here to see Sakura,lady,"Naruto said."Yes go up the stair and go into the first door to the left,"the nurse said.They followed her instructions.They arrived at Sakura's door.Naruto and the Pervy Sage spotted Sakura right away.She laid in a bed by the window.Sakura's eyes were closed.Naruto and the Pervy Sage walked to her bed."She's asleep,"Naruto said.Sakura slowly opened her eyes suddenly."Naruto.I have been waiting for you.Come closer,"she said in a weak voice."Sakura,"Naruto said.Naruto leaned closer.Sakura suddenly sat up and gave Naruto a hard punch in the face which sent him flyning back to the door."Cha!Naruto you caused all of this,"Sakura said getting out of her bed.Sakura pushed past the Pervy Sage and walked to Naruto."Sakura it wasn't my fault,"Naruto siad.7

Sakura now stood right in front of Naruto.Naruto sat on the floor backed up against the door.Sakura started cracking her knuckles."I'm going to rearrange your face Naruto.Sakura brought back her hand.She was about to punch Naruto until the door Naruto leaned against was kicked open by someone.Naruto flew on top of Sakura.They both fell on the floor.naruto layed on Sakura."Hinata!,"the Pervy Sage said.Hinata had flowers in her hand.Hinata looked at Naruto layed on top of Sakura."Sakura!,"Hinata shouted.Hinata angry.Naruto got off top of Sakura and looked at Hinata.Ah,she's scarier than Sakura,Naruto thought.8

"First at the Christmas party and now this Sakura!You wont steal Naruto away from.I can't believe I came here to apoligize!,"Hinata said.Hinata threw the flowers on the floor and stepped on them.Naruto stood up.When did Hinata stop being shy,Naruto thought.Sakura stood up.Sakura grabbed Naruto by the collar and pulled him close to her.Sakura kissed Naruto."Put him down!,"Hinata shouted.Sakura ended her long kiss with Naruto.Sakura kissed me.Finally,Naruto thought.Sakura threw Naruto against the wall."Does that make you jealous.Sister you don't know how long I've waited to get back at you,"Sakura said.Sakura reached in her pocket and pulled out her kunai knife.9

"This is personal.Byakugan!,"Hinata shouted.She activated her Byakugan and pulled out her own kunai knife.Sakura ran at Hinata and swung with her kunai knife.Hinata blocked it with her kunai knife.Hinata backed out of the room."We got to stop them Pervy Sage,"Naruto said getting up."Kid this is perfect research!,"the Pervy Sage shouted.Naruto and the Pervy Sage ran after them.Sakura and Hinata were in the hallway swinging wildly with their kunai knife."There backing up into the stairs.Sakura and Hinat were right by the stairs.Either one of them could fall.Suddenly Hinata dodged and was behind Sakura.Hinata had her kunai knife pointed at Sakura's neck.Sakura stood on the edge of the stairs.Naruto and the Pervy Sage stood a far distance watching.10

"Sakura it's over,"Hinata said.Sakura jumped down to the bottom of the stairs.Sakura stood at the bottom of the stairs looking up at Hinata."Come down,"Sakura said."Sure,"Hinata said.Hinata had a smirk on his face.Hinata jumped from wall to wall downstairs.Sakura readyed herself.When Hinata was close to Sakura she jumped at Sakura and kicked Sakura in her face.Sakura was layed out on the floor.Naruto and the Pervy Sage stood at the top of the stairs."Why couldn't Sakura dodge?,"Naruto asked."Hinata picked up speed which made her kick faster,"the Pervy Sage said.Hinata walked past Sakura going to the front door."Come on Naruto!,"Hinata shouted.11

"Me,"Naruto said."Better do what she says kid,"the Pervy Sage whispered.Naruto ran downstairs and caught up with Hinata.When Hinata was at the entrance door she heard Sakura's voice."Wait!,"Sakura said.Hinata and Naruto turned around.Sakura stood up.Sakura threw down her kunai knife."Like I said this is personal,"Sakura said.Chakra surrounded Sakura's fists.Hinata got more mad.Hinata threw her kunai knife down."You don't know when to quit.Your in my eight trigrams.Sixty four palms,"Hinata said.Again,Naruto thought.Sakura charged at Hinata.Sakura tried to punch Hinata but Hinata swong with her two fingers at Sakura's fist.Hinata stopped Sakura's punch."What the,"Naruto said.Sakura threw more punches but Hinata saw them all coming a mile away.12

"Two palms,four palms,eight palms,sixteen palms,"Hinata said blocking all of Hinata blows.Sakura though backed Hinata outside into the snow."Thirty two palms,fourty eight palms,"Hinata said.Sakura pulled all her chakra into her right fist.Hinata focused energy into her left hand."Sixty four palms!,"Hinata shouted Hinata hit Sakura in her neck.Sakura gasped."It's over,"Hinata didn't finish the sentence.Hinata looked down and saw that Sakura had got off a punch in her stomach.Hinata fell to the ground.Sakura fell too.Naruto and the Pervy Sage ran outside.Sakura got hit in a vital spot,"the Pervy Sage said."What about Hinata?,"Naruto asked."She should be okay but Sakura no>I should have stepped in,"the Pervy Sage said.

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  • Sasora5
    November 21, 2008

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    Kyah!

    I don't like Sakura, so that's good for her!!! ~nyah!!
    Oh yeah, and the 'Pervy Sage' is actually Jiraiya, so, that's a little tip for yah!

  • shadowjerky
    April 14, 2008
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    crazy great (big smile)


  • Lover of Stories
    December 29, 2007

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    ~Hinata had a smirk on his face.~
    That should be "on HER face". The story is a little interesting, but the characters seem kind of two-dimensional. And Hinata seems pretty crazy... She isn't portrayed the way she actually is in the show. Sakura doesn't seem at all like herself, either. But it's your story. Anyways, keep writing. And merry belated Christmas! I hope you enjoyed the holidays ^^


  • Sasora5
    December 25, 2007
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    Hinata is WAY to crazy for Naruto to like her NOW!!!


  • Sailor Moon
    December 23, 2007

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    "How could she be in the hospital.I survived Neji's sixty four palms,"Naruto said."Do you forget Sakura is a girl,"

    And what is that meant to mean exactly? as much as I don't really like Sakura, girls actually have a higher pain threshold than guys. True fact.

    Otherwise not a bad story good job.


  • Friesian
    December 23, 2007

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    lol!

    Ending was FUNNY! I can't imagine Hinata using 64 palms on Sakura! LOL! It was hilarios when Jiraiya ran after Sakura and Hinata, saying it was perfect for his research!

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