He Should've Been there

What if he’d been there? Would it have made a difference? He wished. His brother was now dead because he’d refused to go the Italians with him.

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  • asthray.heart
    December 20, 2007

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    What do you mean by the Italains?
    There is a little game in life that everyone enjoys playing themselves, its is called "What If?".
    This is a good example of said game.

    Tnks for entering and goodluck.

    ~EBBexile.