It was pulling me in, I screamed out but my voice was muffled by a large chocolate chip, it was then I realised, i'm alergic to chocolate...
- The Awesomely Awesome Group For Hypera group list • next in list
A contest entry
- 23 words. by asthray.heart.
146 points, ended December 26, 2007, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
[= tell me the truth... is this okai?
Comments
1 - 7 of 7
-
LOL! It's okay!
-
LOL oh my god that was so funny the way you worded that! I am loving reading your works
That had to have been a hard contest to enter with just though few words.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
-
LMAO this is really funny but sad your allergic to coco chips.
I still think its funny though great job
. You should make more funny stories like this one so I can laugh some more.lol.
-
Random but I ate a chocolate chip muffin this morning for breakfast
-
The idea is fun, but the muffin part of things is only mentioned in the title and not the actual story. The 'it' in the first sentence... what does it point to?
-
LOL!!! you'd die just for not being able to eat them lowl
Tnks for entering and goodluck.
~EBBexile. -
*I'm allergic
This doesn't really tell a complete story. Good try though
Adding your comment:
1 - 7 of 7
