Falling

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I watch upon the horizon thousands of lines, smoke lines reaching into the distance of space. My eyes shut as the missiles fall.2

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Twenty-three words on the mark.

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  • DaniCM
    October 16, 2008
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    it says 21


  • asthray.heart
    December 24, 2007

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    Omg this was amazing. I don't know why I liked this so much with the theme and all. But wow this blew me away.

    Tnks for entering and goodluck.

    ~EBBexile.


  • Miss Hanako Cullen
    December 20, 2007
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    This was powerful! I love that you created so much in only 23 words! I love this! It's awesome!