Friends Over Boyfriends- Part One

It was a hot, summer day it was so hot that when you stepped out you ran back in. Lanae is a girl with a dream of becoming a lawyer. She has a happy life with her family, her best friends especially Joy and of course her boyfriend Stephon. She is rushing to meet up with her bff Joy but, suddenly the phone rings.  
Lanae: Hey Baby!
Stephon: Hey Babe
Lanae: How are u?
Stephon: I am fine what about u?
Lanae: I’m fine I am about to meet Joy but u kind of stop that?
Stephon: Well, I talk to u later ok?
Lanae: Ok! I luv u!
Stephon: I luv u 2! Bye1

After the phone conversation, Lanae was out the door. Lanae met up with Joy caught up with one another’s life. 5 years go by, and a lot has changed Lanae and her boyfriend are having problems. Lanae calls Joy, the phone rings then you suddenly hear a voice. It was Joy; she says “ Hey Girl” Lanae is crying sadly. Joys says, “ What is wrong Lanae?” Lanae says, “ I am having problems wit Stephon’s dumb ass! I believe he is cheating, he says he loves me but, I do not know if he is lying or not and I do not know what to do. I need your help Joy! “ Joy says “ You know I am there when you need me! And u my girl” Lanae says “ Thanks girl! 2

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That’s why you are my bff and you are my sister forever!” What will happen next? Will Stephon be caught cheating? Will Lanae and Stephon end their 8-year relationship? I guess you would have to fin out found out for yourself in Part two of Friends Over Boyfriends4

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  • JessieCHS
    January 10, 2008
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    Omg this story ROCKS lol i like it k\

  • Terence D
    December 19, 2007
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    Nice Beginning to your story

    can't wait to read part two of this story


  • khaliathompson
    December 19, 2007
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    greta story.. I like how you elsaped the time. Great dialouge


  • Starsha B
    December 19, 2007

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    great

    it's a good story u did a wonderful job in a way which alot of people could relate to through the characters can't wait to hear part two


  • shani16
    December 19, 2007
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    good story, can't wait to hear what will happen next

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