Why

As time drifts by,
Fast,
Like clouds in the sky.
Everything grows older.
People die, many cry.
And I sit here,
Growing old,
Still asking why?

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  • Melancholic Smile
    September 22

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    So sad and so true, a really short piece with such deep meaning. I think we all ask ourselves why sometimes I really like this. Thanks for entering


  • im.perfectly.flawed
    December 24, 2007

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    Aww that really sad .
    Very deep short impact made here.

    Tnks for entering an goodluck.

    ~EBBexile.


  • Spartan-015
    December 23, 2007

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    OK you'd better win. This is the most creative one.