As time drifts by,
Fast,
Like clouds in the sky.
Everything grows older.
People die, many cry.
And I sit here,
Growing old,
Still asking why?
A contest entry
- 23 words. by pathetic.
146 points, ended December 26, 2007, 20 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - My story deserves a trophy! by Melancholic Smile.
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Comments
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So sad and so true, a really short piece with such deep meaning. I think we all ask ourselves why sometimes I really like this. Thanks for entering
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Aww that really sad
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Very deep short impact made here.
Tnks for entering an goodluck.
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OK you'd better win. This is the most creative one.
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