The traquil oceans of you

pleasured moments spent with you, tranquil in deep thoughts, so equisite, so blue, My love so deep, It moves like the ocean waves

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  • asthray.heart
    December 20, 2007

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    Wow this was deep. I liked the ocean waves part alot.Moving.

    Tnks for entering and goodluck,

    ~EBBexile.


  • Leech
    December 20, 2007
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    wow, you are definately gonnna at least be a runner up. mine sucks lol


  • Siby Anan
    December 19, 2007

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    Oh, how beautiful. I love it.

    Great descriptions. I trust that your love is as deep as the ocean as well?


  • Dreams of Insanity
    December 19, 2007
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    Yaaay! Blair this rocked! I loved it...I wuuuuuuuuuv you! Haha I really liked this!


  • Starlight-Kisses
    December 19, 2007
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    cool

    it sounds really good nice job

  • hunklariska
    December 19, 2007
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    what does equisitive mean ?


  • lostdreamer189
    December 19, 2007
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    i really like this it sounds so nice.


  • Shiki
    December 19, 2007
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    Hmm beautiful...>_< And deep interesting I love It Depicts of a very powerul love...nicely done blair I like it...a lot

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