Every tear that falls

Every tear that falls,
marks another forgotten voice,
a lost voice,
trying to be found.1

Trying so hard,
a lost voice,
silently cries,
in the dark of night.2

Every tear that falls,
marks another forgotten voice,
a voice long gone,
for eternity,3

Eternity,
can seem so long,
forever in fact,
for a lost voice.4

Every tear that falls,
marks a forgotten voice,
a crying voice,
a dying voice.5

Dying quickly,
fading away,
a lost voice,
screams for help.6

EVERY TEAR THAT FALLS MARKS A FORGOTTEN VOICE.

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  • UnEdibleChick
    March 8, 2008

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    I love this! This is wonderful! I love everything about it even though it has no background Good job! You should feature this so you can see how many other people like it too. Keep up the great work!


  • SaintSeaShell
    December 22, 2007

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    I love the quote that inspired you to write this poem. It is amazing what a quote can bring to the surface.

    Shell


  • forevermyangel14
    December 19, 2007
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    I LOVE!
    this is great!
    thanks for entering

  • Myeisha
    December 19, 2007

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    I love this, very good! It had great flow and I did'nt notice any mistakes. Great job on this!!

    Keep on Writing!!


  • xMomo
    December 19, 2007

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    This was a good poem. kinda depressing but that's what makes it good. lol. umm yeah.anyway..I'd pick a favorite part but every part was my favorite. keep writing poems and stories and poems.haha


    • Beneath The Mask silver member
      December 19, 2007
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      thanks momo. I read this quote and it's on my homepage and it inspired me to write this. the quote is in capital bold letters at the bottom of the poem.

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