.Apologize.

Your apologizes
don't change
the fact
that I'm
broken.1


Your apologizes
wont mean
anything
when they
find me
cut and
open.

Author notes

again with crap.
but
it helps.

Make me OKAY.

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have 0. (?) (Line numbers)
    Ratings:

Comments


  • Kyoku Luv
    February 2, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    that sucked but the colors are sexi.


  • Lizz Emm
    December 19, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    Oh, Gaby. D:

    I'm going to be home all afternoon if you can sign on, and I would like to talk to you to see how you are doing. You don't deserve to feel like this at all.

    I understand that she has hurt you.

    If you miss her so, then go back with her. If you miss what you had, talk to her. Talking through poems leaves so much unsaid; so much to question. (For the both of you)

    Hell, even fighting helps. You get out what you'd normally fake over. And after it all, you CAN make up. I can understand how things are really confusing and painful... but maybe you need to think out of the box to try and solve it, you know?

    Nice poem, though. *huggles*

    characters: 1.


  • asthray.heart
    December 18, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    again with crap.
    but
    it helps.
    says more then poem does itself. Seems you are hurting, this is the helpful way of venting and you are venting powerfully with words that get right to the point, open the wounds you feel and bare them to everyone who cares enough to read.

    This was well done, emotional.

    ~EBBexile.