Sorry for I am a bit emotional in this entry, I have made a poem to explain the feelings on the depressing day.1
Today I was walking2
And people were stalking3
I looked behind my back4
And looking I lacked5
The vision to see them6
my black hair was in the way7
One guy yelled at me laughingly. Your Gay.8
I cried tears of blood9
and started a flood10
Throughtout the east cost11
People were dying12
in my tears of satin13
i was still watin14
for him to take me15
or to make me16
his aprrentice17
I love his shattered black soul18
and his heart which was repleaced by a black hole.19
I screamed at those people20
who were laughing at me 21
they took out hot tea22
and dumped it on my face23
it felt like angels spraying mase24
i cried some more25
and my eyes got sore26
from all my crying27
i too was trying28
to stop the emotions inside my head29
so i went home and went to bed30
my dad beat me for my boyfriend came to my house31
and my dad walked in as he was penetrating my blouse32
he hates that im gay33
so the next day34
i went to maryland 35
and tried to drown myself in a bay36
but it didn't work37
for i was saved by a stork38
who picked me up in his mouth39
and brought me to the south40
were i was forced to joing a klan41
the people looked at me and ran towards my hacked soul42
my clothes made them think i was a blaCK mole43
who was spying on them44
but then they saw45
that i was sreamin rawwww46
and they said hey hes not black47
hes just a stupid pathetic emo48
Then i cried again 49
and killed those mean men50
with my shattered soul51
that was role52
to sack the KKK53
i did that i say54
But on the next day55
I was feeling lonely56
for my boyfriend conely57
was so far away from my hurt heart58
and my ex boyfrined59
his name was bart60
I ran back home61
and gave them both dome62
at the same time63
my dad walked in i have no ryhme64
for what happened next.65
He killed Bart and Conely66
and I looked at them67
on the ground bleeding 68
its like they were meeting69
lucifer for the first time I wanted to die70
so my lasy ryhme71
is rawrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.72
THIS IS A TRUE FUCKING STORY?
Comments
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acturaly no offense but the whole lucifer thing just scared the crap outta me and whats with the last line rawrrrr i mean sorry i dont get it.
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all i can say
is don't listen to other peopels shit,
you are who you are
and you can never let anybody get in the way of that.
you write with such raw emotion, and that is a tru gift, not many people can do that.
also, to write such a long peice, and not have it drag on, that shows talent to.
althought you write differently to how i write, i still enjoyed the read.
keep writting!!!!
luv HB
xoxox
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OMG I LOVE YOU
This is the single most amazing poem that has ever been written. RAWRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!! im just joking, but the scary thing is that at my school the whole Lucifer thing is a joke because we hate emos, so know whenever something stupid happens we just scream RAWRRRRR. But seriously you are retarded and need to seek professional help.beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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ok...like i said and i will say it again...u are creepy amd i am probably one of the very MANY people who are glad they dont know you!
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huh, wtf is up with the dome thing?
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duuuuushhhhhhbag!
OKAY DOME IS DEFINITION FOR "THE HUMAN HEAD" and slang for giving head which is sucking a penis fag.
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You ought to watch spelling...at least!
You're
East COAST
Waitin'
Replaced
Mace
Maryland
Join
Boyfriend
Lucifer
Rhyme
But...these are the least of your problems with this.
Hostile...to say the least.
Sorry.
dome?
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hey
hey fucking retard dome is when you take a penis and shove it in your mouth you stupid bitchy pansy fuckhead. -
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god settle down- we got what it means!
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