My Qoute

This is my first qoute so but be honest about what you think if you comment.1

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~Once you eat the cake, it's gone forever~3

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I don't know about this qoute, It seems cheesy to me.

A contest entry

My first qoute, please tell me what you think.

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  • The-Geebung
    June 11, 2008
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    That's interesting. Is there any point to it?
    And even if there is a bakery down the street that particular cake that you ate will always be gone. The bakery can make the same type of cake but can never make the same cake, 'cause you've eaten.
    Can I use that quote?


  • NiceGirl
    April 25, 2008
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    and thats so true! unfortunately we never come back to where we once were. Good quote


  • Squirt05
    March 17, 2008
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    nice quote. it is very good. it is a funny but serious quote. Good quote, i like it.


  • whichcraft Greeters member
    March 15, 2008

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    There are so many situations you can put for this quote. I think it's funny that you should pick that particular one.


  • IntrepidFantasy Greeters member
    February 14, 2008

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    Very cute quote you have here You should really think of entering this into theDARK1's quotes contest.


  • Fizbop
    February 5, 2008
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    short but sweet. Bad pun i know but it's true.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • LadyLionnir
    January 12, 2008
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    Oh, excellent use of words. Very deep. Gonna go find me some cake!

    • Myeisha
      January 12, 2008
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      Really??!?! Thank you very much!Lol. I think I'm gonna go get some cake too. This made me hungry.


  • EphemeralStyle
    January 10, 2008

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    I feel its pain! I'd never heard of that quote but a few weeks ago I was sad because I wanted to eat my chocolate, but I felt I couldn't because of THIS reason! It's so sad... *tear* lol

    • Myeisha
      January 12, 2008
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      Lol, Oh well. No more cake for you missy!
      Thanx for commenting.


  • bleue.
    January 6, 2008
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    It makes me want to eat cake. :-)


  • Edeyn
    January 4, 2008
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    Pardon the pun... but that has so many layers to it...


  • Melissa Loves Jeffy
    December 30, 2007

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    This quote makes sence in its literal way but in its deeper meaning does not....Well thats just my opinion. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest.


  • ice wolf Greeters member
    December 27, 2007
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    eh, it's alright.

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