That you believe.....

That you believe….. 1

Building my character
Knowing not when to stop,
just growing with every day passing.
Pushing down the fear of vilification.2

Do I listen to the voice in my head?
Or
Do I follow the path of my heart?3

I want to be me but still
I like your opinions.
That you believe there is a better
and stronger Cindy,
Only just, under-surface hiding.4

Do I thrive for me and
re-model for you?5

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Wrote it for a ocntest on another site, with the prompt of transition

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  • Miki Koishikawa
    December 21, 2007
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    I like it add on

  • one last time...
    December 20, 2007

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    wow.

    fav. part: Do I thrive for me and
    re-model for you?

    you write great poetry. i am jealous. lol.

    again gj.


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      December 20, 2007
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      Aw thank you, I admit yes poetry does come easier then my story writing

      Thanks again gj


      Cindy


  • Intrepid silver member
    December 17, 2007

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    interesting..It did compell me to read each line and speak thetruth to me..like all you poems do.. I just love th last line