She felt an angel descend from Heaven to rest upon her shoulder and kiss her cheek, while a single tear fell from her eye and her smile became a laugh in the face of Death.
Author notes
I'm a male. I entered because it seemed cool.
A contest entry
- : Take a Second and Come In! (Read it ALL or do not enter!) by Taylor Renee.
500 points, ended January 6, 2008, 48 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh, goodness.
This was absolutely beautiful.
I seem to use that word in a lot of my comments, lately.
But it truely is.
I really love it, because of course it follows all of my rules and yet it really is extraordinary.
The wording is great, vocabulary superb. You wrote it brilliantly and I'm so glad you decided to enter!
Because this is a very nice entry.
Thanks sooo much for taking the time for my contest, andI wish you the best of luck!
xoxo
-♥-
Tay
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