I mourn for those whose black hearts have been covered with red ribbon, those who never dare to fall, those whose hatred is for none other than themselves.
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Yes, I'm female.
I entered this contest because I think it is an AMAZING idea. It makes you think, makes you try to spill your heart out in one sentance, I love it!!!
A contest entry
- : Take a Second and Come In! (Read it ALL or do not enter!) by Taylor Renee.
500 points, ended January 6, 2008, 48 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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this has so much meaning. its kidna inspirational! it has so much power packed into a sentence
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This was absolutely beautiful! So sad, so heartbreaking, but beautifully written and portrayed.
Ansolutely incredible.
And I'm so glad you feel this way about my contest! Thanks so much! I take that as a wonderful conpliment!
Just...really. You did a great, great job with this entry! Thanks so much for contributing it to my contest, and I wish you luck with it!
xoxo
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Tay
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thanks
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This is deep.
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it's suppose to be
took me FOREVER to write, and it still sucks..
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does not.
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i'm going to enter like a zillon times..haah she's going to read this
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let me make on up.
like right now.
hmm.
I would die a thousand times, instead of lying to myself just to find out I can't be with you.
Haterid towards myself grows stronger everday.
haha i suck big time.
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lol
well kudos to you, this one is for you
whats with the first one? -
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love.
i told you i suck. -
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who?
you dont suck.
lmfao
"whats with that four-lettered word?" -
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some guy idk i just made it up.
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
i finished your surpriseee!
it sucks..ihate it..dammit -
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what is it?
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wtf is with you?
a surprise means you dont know what it's gonna be until you get it tardddd -
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then stop talking about it.
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just saying, it sucks, so dont get yer hopes up
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its a cd
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and something else
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a card?
haha ill make you guys cards since im broke.
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nope
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ill write you little letters and all
hey.
ITS THE THOUGHT THAT COUNTS. -
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letters are better than anything anyway, you can always hang on to them ya know?
yeah i wrote you a letter, it sucks, i hate it, it has like a zillon p.s.'s haha -
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so it is a letter
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no it's meat balls
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yum
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covered in sauce...mmmmm
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eww stopp
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i'm bored now..cant think of nemore...hmmm
If you can see the world in someone’s eyes then you’ll truly know that love is all that matters. ?
nonononononononoo
HMMmmm
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