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A child excited is a family misguided.

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  • J.R. Coleman
    March 3, 2008
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    I simply adored this. Very open, so many different ways to interept. Good luck.


  • Taylor Renee
    December 16, 2007

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    Wow!

    I like this, because it leaves so much room for interpretation. It's so simple, and it lets me ponder over what you mean. I really love it.

    'A child excited is a family misguided.'

    That can be taken so many different ways, which is really great!

    And you followed all my rules, which is great

    I'm really excited with all the entries I'm getting! But this'll be a hell of a contest to judge!

    Anyway, thank you so much for taking the time for my contest, and I wsih you the best of luck!

    xox
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    Tay