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A wink of a devil's eye can easily be mistaken for that of an angel's smile.

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Male.
I think this contest is good for thinking up plot basis and morals, actually.

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  • Paragonz Shadow
    January 3, 2008

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    Very, very good. I really liked it! Thought provoking and original. Great flow and very simple...which is exactly how it needed to be. Awesome writing, man!!

    Kudos and good luck with the contest (although I don't think you need it )


  • Taylor Renee
    December 16, 2007

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    Wow.

    Wow. This was so good, I can't even say it.

    I really, really love how this is...open for interpretation, I guess I could say. How this sort of leaves my imagination to help with what you have.

    And you have more than one of my words, which is AWESOME.

    You wrote this so flawlessly, and the plot really makes me wonder. What could happen, the exact meaning of what you said. Everything.

    And you're one of my only male participants I don't usually see a lot of men enter my contests...I wonder why. But guess what? Apparently male power's with you: you made the finalist's list! Congrads!

    I just...wow. This is absolutely terrific. Thank you for your author's notes, I take that as a conpliment. [I think this contest is good for thinking up plot basis and morals, actually.]

    I really love your entry. Thanks so much for taking the time for my contest [and following my rules!] and I wish you the best of luck!

    xoox
    -♥-
    Tay