Crying blood so sweet hell in apathy
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A contest entry
- : Take a Second and Come In! (Read it ALL or do not enter!) by Taylor Renee.
500 points, ended January 6, 2008, 48 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Wewt...short but sweet..I mean in terms of Really...how it is correctly and nicely phrased....real nice work...Keep it up
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Turmoil and Sadist wrapped in one
This was good... though I would like to know what made you think about the particular sentence. Good luck in the contest, sweetie
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dark ^_&
just rolled thats all..given the choices and the devil thing I used to have ....seemed to make sense that you know blood could be blood in this crazy hell of a life from having a lack of no emotion towards something...its when your feels completely just are non existent almost as if crushed ..as if they disintergrated into a thousand ashes.. Lol good work I think on my part
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Wow.
I really like this a lot!
And it's the first entry that has one of my favorite words in it: apathy. [Don't ask why it's one of my fave words!]
This is so simple, yet so extraordinary. It leaves so much open for my imagination. I love it.
I can't believe how stupid SW wordcount is
It has dislexia, maybe?
'Crying blood so sweet hell in apathy'
SW says:
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4 views, 1 visitor views, 5 words. Age Adult
^ Either I can't count, or SW is losing it!
Anyway, this was a fabulous entry.
Thank you very much for taking the time to enter my contest, and I wish you the best of luck!
xoxo
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Tay
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tay :)
APATHY....lol I remember it from a few songs Like the emo kid...MOOD APATHETIC .... it is a fucking good..word..mind my spelling but count me wrong ot call me non conformist but doesn't it just tring raw emotion, cause you just lack whats there so ..it's like, carving your weins to realise that there is no blood to leak or selling you soul to find out you dont even hve one if that makes sense to you...
thnaks for reading
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This is short but amazing. I think you should take it and make it into something even more amazing.
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missy ^*^
I dont think I plan on expanding but it be great somewhere as a prompt one day..thaks for reading 
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