Even the most forlorn butterfly can find its way to heaven.
Author notes
Male.
To keep off the craving of natchos a few seconds longer.
(If you like it, I actually plan to use it as a first line and/or last line in an upcoming novel. It'd fit in very well I think)
A contest entry
- : Take a Second and Come In! (Read it ALL or do not enter!) by Taylor Renee.
500 points, ended January 6, 2008, 48 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I don't like this.
I absolutely love it.
Did I scare you for a second?
Anyway. I really, really love this entry. You used only one line, but more than 2 of my words! Which shows you're up for a challenge, and you pulled it off wonderfully!
This has such creativity in it, and it's so simple yet extraordinary.
Very good work!
(And you're autho's notes made me smile!)
I really think you should use it for the begiining of a novel! If you do, you should PM me when you get it out! I'd be happy to read it!
Anyway, this was seriously wonderful. You did a great job.
Thank you sooo much for taking the time for my contest, and I wish you luck!
xoxo
-♥-
Tay
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why do you put Male. in your author notes?
im curious now
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