If death were so sweet, would we all keel over and die without a thought of what we would be leaving behind; or would we want to treasure such a moment to make life more extended and willing when we do die?
Author notes
I chose death, yes.
Female.
I entered this contest because I love how you have so many going at a time and can be so creative as well.
~EBBexile.
A contest entry
- : Take a Second and Come In! (Read it ALL or do not enter!) by Taylor Renee.
500 points, ended January 6, 2008, 48 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - A Quote Contest by Melissa Loves Jeffy.
120 points, ended January 11, 2008, 28 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
so what do you think?
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I would never choose death and hate the fact that it is a part of life. When I was a kid, I always dreamed of being a vampire so I would never have to meet death.
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I liked it! Good grammar and spelling...although it was so long I can't possibly read it again to check
Provoking topic and ideas and they were presented in an interesting way that made good use of an extended vocab.
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This is an amazing quote and one of the best so far!!! i in general am going to miss this life when I die lol. I wouldn't be able to just fall over and die. Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!
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Oh my goodness!
This is absolutely wonderful. (I just sounded like an old person XD) It's so deep and beautiful, yet so...almost wise (?) at the same time. I don't know, it just has a lot of really nice meaning. It's such a good question, and I LOVE how you entered with a question!!!
And thw word you chose was lovely, I'm glad I put it there!
Plus you followed my rules, thank you! And that was nice of you (in your ANs) to say, thanks a lot!
Really nice job, here! I love it. Thank you so much for taking the time for my contest, and I wish you the best of luck!!
xoxo
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Tay
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Nice touch... sums it up in such a small peice.. death....loved it and I love death lol ><
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