DAMN, but she was good, A sleek auburn beauty whose rippling muscles defined her as a champion. She was the fastest thing I had ever seen; despite her youth and lack of experience.
A contest entry
- First Lines by werner1221.
145 points, ended December 24, 2007, 24 entries
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Did you know it was actually a race horse? LOL
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only 2 eh? that doesn't take away from it though. death of your horse? thats my guess.
anyways gj and thx for entering
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So is this a horse or a woman?
It was a good two sentences.
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Oops
I made a change and reduced it to two rather than three. Now thanks to my mentor, I can get back into the competition.
Yeah its a horse. To be honest, it started out when I was thinking of you and laughed about the theme. I decided to play it safe and make it a horse. I've seen your picture so no reflection on you!! I did eventually stick a story of you into the mix and I suspect that you'll stumble across it soon enough.
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OOOO I like this one... gives of that she must be athletic at least I THINK lol... unless you meant something else.. which my mind can wander into that pathway lol....either way if you pln on writing a story from it.. I would read it... well needs more work but ^+^ tete good start
GOOD LUCK ^_^
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