Bridger parked the old Mustang beneath the ladder and got out. I crept up to the ladder when Sandy said to me, "Hallie are you sure this is safe it's surrounded by police tape." I looked to her and shook my head no and began to climb the tower and yelled down to them "But if you stay behind the yellow Police tape all your life it's hard to know where the fun lies."
A contest entry
- First Lines by werner1221.
145 points, ended December 24, 2007, 24 entries
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"But if you stay behind the yellow Police tape all your life it's hard to know where the fun lies."
I thought that this simple line was the most provocative; intruging, profound and mysterious line of all...
I want to know how you used this line and where the story idea was used or discarde...
blake ♣
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Thanks, the idea's kind of on hold for now. I'll totally use the sentence. Thanks loads times pi for the comment. XD.
love,
natalie
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whoa
very nice last sentence.
& i'm big on last and first sentences.
while your 1st sentences was normal, your last sentence was extremely good.
good luck and thanks for entering
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