ok so im standing in a dark room...and im like tripping over something...then a dim light turns on and im standing in an endless room of dead bodies....so i goto look for someone else that was living...then from behind another person my age runs up begging for help...i said i cant help you but im looking for help too...so we look around in the pale darkness looking for a sign of life...then we see a man picking up bodies...we walk up to him and say who are you why are we here?!?!?...he turned around and he had no face what was left of his face was soupy blood and melting flesh...instinctivly we both ran...and then from behind a voice said stop...we turn around and theres satan so we asked him are we in hell he said no your on earth...thats when we were like what the hell and looked around...then everything shock and i end up in a basement and i see my best friend lying in a bed...he rolls over and his face is melted just like the man in the dream or so i thoguht it was a dream then the creature jumped up and bite in to my face and knocked me out...then in the darkness once again the lights of a stage bare down on me and a small voice said you wont live to see tomarrow youll see yourself die and you wont be dead...youll betray yourself or die triing...then i wake up in my bed its 3:15 in the morning...so i call my lover on the phone and sorta tell her about the dream i had...i walk outside talking to her on the phone...and im smoking a cigarette when i here something sound like it screamed help help help and i looked a round and we laugh about it...then about 5 minutes later again i hear it scream help help this time it was clearer and it sound like a little kid..and i say goodbye and set the phone down...then i run down the street to woods and out from them runs out a little boy...and i flinched when i saw him because he looked like i used to...then i asked him his name he replied with mine...i take a step back and look around me...then scream what is this...gunshot rang out...the bullet flew threw the boy's head...my reaction and emotion is plain as if i just watched myself get shot...so i scream take me too take me too...then i one again hear a child screaming help help help but this time it doesnt stop so im like what the hell...so i walk into the woods to look for the shooter...i see the gun and the bullets laying on a stomp...on the handle engraved was my name...on the bullet was writing faintly making it out it said my last chance to live or dieand i take the gun and shot my last chance into...............
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I wrote this a year ago...
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Very twisted. I like how you overlay the story from dream to real and past with present. Good job.

