Autumn Sunsets under Rainbows flowing - Part 1.

Autumn Sunsets under Rainbows flowing - Part 1.1

We’d been on the road all day,
temperatures felt like they were
reaching boiling point.
The collection of CDs had cycled through.2

From the long rough-road journey
we were both seething with agitation,
hungry bellies grumbled and we got very snappy.3

Silently I prayed for a McDonalds, KFC or even a servo.
Another hour passed and the big M was on the horizon,
“finally” I groaned.
We ate our greasy burgers like animals then
went back to the almost mind controlling
white lights and moving scenery....4

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Something I am working on, This is part one and the build up to a captivating ending, I hope

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  • Faker
    January 8

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    Something I can relate to, its a six hour drive from here to Mebourne, ugh...Tis a good one, I'll read this one. Can I ask about Lillian or is that on hiatus at the moment?