Count Me In!!!

"Isn't it wonderful!" exclaimed Samantha. They had just checked into their room at the Desert Inn and had gone down into the casino. This was their first vacation since they had married two years before. Samantha was all excited. They had saved three thousand dollars for the trip and had purchase a special package which included air fare and three nights in Las Vegas for only $350.1

"Yes, Sam. It's great. I'm going to start with Texas Hold'em," said Fred.2

"I want to play the slots," said Samantha barely able to contain herself. She was shy about playing for big dollars, yet at the same time she was attracted to the machines like steel to a magnet.3

"Let's play for an hour and then meet at the buffet," suggested Fred.4

"Okay, but remember not to gamble over the limit we set," she reminded him.5

"Yes, Mommy," he chided her.6

The casino had issued them debit cards with the money they had placed on them. They had agreed on $250 each, each day, unless they were ahead. The slot machines accepted the cards and automatically deducted the bet and posted the winnings. Logically, of course; Sam hoped to win more than she lost. Samantha sat down at the nickel machines first. She put her card into the slot and punched in the minimum ten cent bet. She lost, but it was fun watching symbols line up. She did it again and won fifty cents, she was thrilled. It seemed it was possible that she could win up to fifty dollars. She continued to play.7

The buy-in for Texas Hold'em was a minimum of $100. Fred gave the cashier his card and he sat at a table, got his chips, and waited for the table of ten to fill. That didn't take long. Soft drinks in the casino were free and Fred was determined to be careful about his drinking, so he was nursing a Dr. Pepper. Play began, the blinds were $5 and $10. Fred folded the first hand, the blind had not reached him. The table was no limit.8

Watching him a few feet from the table was a young attractive woman with brown hair and eyes. Each time their eyes made contact she would smile. Fred smiled back. Fred and Samantha were not prudes, in fact; they had done a little couples' swapping. They felt secure in their relationship and the swapping had been enjoyable and entertaining, but nothing that would lead to a breakup. The young woman found Fred's sandy hair, brown eyes, and sturdy build very appealing and she made no effort to hide it.9

"Your blind is up," said the dealer.10

"Oh sorry," said Fred and put two five dollar chips out. He was dealt two aces. He debated about how much to bet when the bet came back around to him. Playing on the internet with ten players, he'd gone down about fifty percent of the time with pocket rockets. He decided to play it safe. When it came back to him he had been raised ten. He called. On the flop were two threes and a Queen. The threes made him uncomfortable, someone probably had the third. He called the $20 raise. On the turn was a 9, a chance of a flush or a straight. Five players were still in, but everybody checked. An ace came up on the river, only four threes could beat him. He went all in. Two players went with him. The pot was $410 and two players were out as he won with aces full of threes. The brunette beamed at him.11

The man saw the beautiful blonde at the nickel machines. He took note of her lovely figure and long supple legs. She was dressed in a green dress which rose well above her knees and had a low neckline. He also noticed her ring.12

"How are you doing?" he asked Samantha.13

"Down about five bucks," she answered paying him little attention. She knew full well that her was hitting on her. She held her hand out to emphasize that she was wearing a ring.14

"I saw that, but you seemed so all alone."15

"Well, I'm not."16

"Mind if I watch?" he asked.17

Samantha gave him a thorough appraisal, decided, and said, "Well, I guess it's okay. You might bring me luck."18

He sat at the empty slot machine next to her and put his card in. "I'm Barney, how long you been playing this machine?"19

"I'm Sam. I've been here about thirty minutes." She was focusing most of her attention on the machine, although she did observe that the gentlemen was in good shape for his late thirties or early forties. She had always heard that older men were better sexually than younger men and the thought made her blush.20

She lined up nickels two ways and got $20 and she nearly squealed with excitement. Barney almost laughed to see her so pleased with such a small win. "This your first time to Vegas?"21

"Yes, how did you know?" she asked him.22

"Oh, I've been around here a long time and I can usually tell the newcomers."23

"You're betting $5 at a time," she observed.24

"Yes, I like it a little more interesting."25

Samantha increased her bets to 50 cents. In a short while she was down again. She checked her watch, ten minutes to go. She reduced her bets to 25 cents and played on. After an hour of playing she was out a little more than ten dollars. Looking at her watch again, she said, "Well, I've got to go meet my husband."26

"Finished already?"27

"Yes, we're going to eat at the buffet."28

"Well, it was nice meeting you, Sam."29

"You, too."30

Fred was up just over $2,000. He hated to stop, but it had been an hour, so he cashed in his chips and they credited his card. The woman followed him and said, "You did really great. You should be playing for higher stakes."31

Fred laughed and said, "I was nervous as hell, nearly peed myself once."32

The woman smiled her smile and laughed, saying, "You definitely could have fooled me."33

"Apparently, I fooled everyone."34

"You must be from out of town?"35

"Yes, I guess it's obvious," admitted Fred.36

"Well, while your here, you should get a good massage," she said smiling.37

"Is that an offer?" 38

"Not exactly, but I do know a place."39

"What place?"40

"Starlight Massage Parlor. Just tell them Nancy sent you."41

"Okay, Nancy. Thanks." Nancy smiled and walked off.42

'Peculiar' thought Fred. 'Must have been a salesperson.' but a massage did sound like fun.43

The buffet had a variety of meats, vegetables, salads and desserts. Fred piled it on and Samantha did justice to the meal as well. They sat at a booth in the corner of a large dining area closed off from the rest of the casino. "How'd you do," asked Fred.44

"I lost ten dollars," she answered.45

"I wound up with around $2,100," said Fred with an understated calm.46

"$2,100!!" she almost shouted. Fred loved the sparkle in Samantha's blue eyes. It always pleased him when she reacted so full of exuberance.47

"That pays for the vacation!" she added, "And then some."48

They finished their dinner and then went to a magic show. After that they returned to the casino and played for a couple of hours, but stayed about even. Worn from travel, fun, and excitement they went to bed and had token sex. About noon the following day, they rose. "How would you like to get a massage?" asked Fred.49

"Oh, that sounds marvelous!" said Samantha.50

They showered together and dressed. Catching a taxi, Fred told the driver, "The Starlight Massage Parlor."51

"Sure thing," said the cabby.52

The Starlight Massage Parlor proved to be a one story building with a large neon sign, which was off during the day. The building was painted a dark blue and the windows were painted the same color. A sign advised that no one under 16 was permitted. "Hi!" said a pert young blonde who barely looked sixteen herself standing behind a desk. There were empty chairs lining the walls. Samantha and Fred were the only customers present in the waiting area.53

"You're here for a massage?"54

"Yes," said Fred.55

"Do you want the full treatment?" said the girl.56

"Yes."57

"That will be $150 for the two of you."58

Fred handed her his Visa card and she quickly ran it through the machine. He signed the slip and kept the receipt. 59

"You can go on in, the changing rooms are on the right."60

They changed out of their clothing into the white terrycloth robes, which were provided. A big muscular man with dark hair led Samantha into a room with a table about six feet in length and 2 1/2 feet wide. Having her lie on her stomach first, he began to rub in a jasmine scented oil all over the backside of her body. While this was going on, Fred was receiving similar treatment from a woman who could have been a wrestler. She, of course; was using an oil with a more masculine odor. 61

Samantha felt a bit self conscious, especially when she turned over onto her back. She had loved the sensation of the firm pounding of her backside with the heels of his hands. As he rubbed her muscles when his large hands, she could have purred like a kitten.62

"Is this your first massage?" he asked her.63

"Yes, is it that obvious?"64

"Well, you had goose bumps and you were rather tense at the beginning."65

"Oh."66

"You have a lovely body."67

"Thank you."68

"How does it feel?" he asked.69

"Wonderful, it might be better than sex," she said laughing.70

"Good sex is pretty hard to beat," he stated.71

"What do you mean?" 72

"I mean, maybe you haven't experienced really good sex before."73

"My sex life is fine," she said emphatically.74

"Have you ever gotten into BDSM? It can really put a new edge on sex."75

"No, not really," she answered and couldn't help being curious. "What's so special about it?"76

"It adds more excitement to the sexual acts."77

"How so?"78

"Have you ever been tied and gently tormented while you were having sex?" he asked.79

"No." In a perverted way the idea did seem to appeal to her.80

"There is a private club just outside of town we call, The Dungeon. It is for members only, but you and your husband could go as my guests. I believe you will find it a sexual experience you won't forget."81

"I'll have to talk it over with my husband," Samantha said.82

"If you are interested, meet me here at 5:00 pm.83

Samantha and Fred felt very refreshed and very relaxed after the massage. Samantha told Fred about the offer to go to The Dungeon. "If you think you'd like to do it, count me in," said Fred enthusiastically. A little before five they returned to the massage parlor. The girl told them to go on back, again there was no one in the waiting area. Apparently they did not have alot of business. The masseur greeted them. "My name is Jake."84

"I'm Fred, my wife Samantha."85

"Before we go, there are a couple of forms for you to fill out in case of injury," said Jake. "Name, address, phone, social security, that sort of thing."86

"Injury?" repeated Fred.87

"We get kind of rough when we play and accidents occasionally happen, though not likely. It's just mostly a formality."88

Hesitantly Fred said, "Okay." and they completed the forms. It was absolving the club of any responsibility. They loaded up in Jake's SUV and headed out of town. They came upon a gate off the main road leading down a private drive. Jake unlocked the gate and drove down the drive. A large manufactured steel building appeared and there were about ten cars parked in front of it.89

Inside it was bright and everything was painted white. A couple of large beds were in the one large building. There were posts, a rolling hoist, a modern version of a rack, a pit with coals about the length of a person, a frame which could bend a person into ungodly positions, and a large plexi-glass tank of water. Dildos, paddles, whips and other items of torment were hung along a wall. A guillotine was also in the building. In a corner was a large kitchen facility.90

There were four women and five men not counting Jake, Samantha, and Fred. All of the men and three of the women wore nothing but collars around their necks with numbers. One woman wore black leather garments. Jake got collars for Samantha and Fred with the numbers 11 and 12 respectively. "You are slaves now and we'll address you by number. Now strip!" Jake commanded. Fred and Samantha willingly disrobed. In the meantime, Jake changed into leather garb.91

"You'll address Sharon and me as Mistress and Master."92

"Yes, Master," said Samantha submissively.93

"One and two, take twelve to the frame and tie him there."94

"A man and a woman took Fred to the frame and tied him bending over forward on it spreading his legs wide."95

"Fuck him, one." The man put a prophylactic on his penis and began butt fucking Fred. Fred never had anal intercourse. He was disturbed and frightened, though it was not particularly painful.96

"Eleven, eat my pussy," said Sharon. She laid on the bed, legs spread wide. 97

"Yes, Mistress." Reluctantly Samantha got into position and began cunnilingus. It was the first time for her and not something she had ever thought she would do. The idea repulsed her, but it was not as bad as she had felt it would be. In fact, Samantha almost enjoyed it. She realized that she was becoming damp in the recess between her legs and she was surprised.98

When Sharon was satisfied, she squeezed Samantha's breasts and kissed her fully and deeply at her mouth. Tying Samantha's hands behind her, Sharon said, "Fuck Samantha, four." Shoving Samantha on the bed, the man called four roughly screwed Samantha. Again Samantha found herself responding more than she expected. She rather enjoyed the hard fuck.99

Jake strapped a ball gag in Fred's mouth and began lashing at him with a whip. Muffled screams came from his mouth, but they were hardly audible across the room where Samantha was. 100

"Suck six's dick," ordered Sharon.101

"Yes, Mistress," Samantha said, her hands still tied behind her. She got into position and did her best to get six off with her mouth alone. She was not able, but the man jerked himself off keeping the head of his bulging penis in Samantha's mouth. He erupted and Samantha did her best to swallow.102

Jake had one and two carry Fred over to the guillotine, the ball gag still in place, hands tied behind his back. Samantha screamed when she saw they were placing Fred into the guillotine. Jake adjusted the guides of the guillotine around Fred's neck. He pulled the release lever and swish, the instrument of slaughter decapitated Fred. Samantha was wailing uncontrollably.103

Four and six had been restraining Samantha. Now they led her to a table and held her in place as Jake got an eight foot spit and putting it in her anus, began driving it inside her, and through her viscera. She screamed and pleaded as they skewered her like a pig. The rod penetrated her stomach and diaphragm, missing the lungs and heart, continuing through her throat and out of her mouth. Blood at her mouth and buttocks, she was still alive, though barely able to breath. Attaching her hands and feet to the spit, they put her over the coals to roast. Feeling the intense heat of the fire, she lived about ten minutes longer. They roasted her for three hours, slow cooking over the coals. Fred they butchered and froze to be cooked and eaten later. 104

They sent a woman and a man, who vaguely resembled Samantha and Fred, to the hotel to check out and to gather their belongings. They posted the limit on their credit cards after calling to determine what credit balance remained. Also cashing in their casino cards, they had taken nearly everything of value that they had possessed. Samantha and Fred had now vanished, never to be seen again. Their remains would be buried somewhere in the desert of Nevada.105

"That was fun," said Sharon as they neared the end of the party.106

"Yes, it's a shame we can't do it more often."107

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  • finalist

  • Whoa, this odly turned me on hahaha. It was very enjoyable and completely unexpected.

    very nicely done

    • Hi there COoKiE!

      Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading, commenting, and applauding. I appreciate it. I'm pleased you like my story.

      If you read much of my horror or crime erotica, you'll find I have a habit of writing this type of story. I like reading and writing them.

      I'm glad it was a turn on. If you'd like me to totally warp you, allow me to show you around more of my stuff.

      Just let me know you'd like my sordid erotic stories.

      Andy


  • XyiDai
    March 5

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    unexpected

    this was a very interesting story. I enjoyed it. It was unexpected, macabre and twisted. brilliant!!

    beginning: 4, plot: 5, ending: 5, characters: 5.

    • Hi!

      I'm very pleased that you like this story. If you like stories such as these, you might check out 'The Disturbed Forum' under 'Dolcett'. I have a few other stories that you might find fun along these lines.

      Thanks for reading and commenting.

      Andy


  • Rein
    December 28, 2008

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    That was very livid in description! I like how you made the couple kind of loose sexully wise, other wise the story would have sucked! The torture ws brillant, even though, it didn't seem the husband, fred got any fun out of it. And the ending wa kind of funny to me, because it kind of remnded me of hostile, in amsterdam, making me never want to travel to foregien countries. Great work! ^o^

    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      December 28, 2008
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      Thanks Rein

      Thanks for hosting this contest and for reading and commenting. I appreciate it. I hope you like this story.

      The club members were not really out to entertain Fred and Samantha.

      I hope you have many good entries and much fun.

      Andy


  • Lonesome Dove
    December 27, 2008

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    WOW! What a great story. Nice young couple, first vacation in a while, enjoying their time in Vegas. It was nice and smooth flowing and I was almost wondering, where the heck is this this going; and then wham, you hit me. It went from 0 to 60 in under a minute. Great descriptions and horrific ending. Great Job!

    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      December 27, 2008
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      Thanks

      Thanks for reading, commenting, and all the applause. I appreciate it. I'm very pleased that you like this story.

      Andy


  • cole3313
    September 4, 2008

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    It was disturbing. Very. But then again I've been reading all kinds of disturbing stories lately. =] It was pretty good. I liked it.

    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      September 4, 2008
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      Thank You

      I'm glad you like this story. It is rather disturbing, but it was writtten in an effort to win a contest, which it did. I hope it fares well in your contest, too.

      Andy


  • ToxicBlood
    May 2, 2008
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    Sad..=(

    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      May 2, 2008
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      You are scraping the bottom of the barrel.

      Thanks for reading and commenting. This was another contest entry which won first place. I guess that also says something about the contests hosts.

      For you to earn points on your comments, they need to be about a hundred characters in length.

      Andy


  • Krazy Scott
    December 15, 2007

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    You get what you play for? No, bad moral...

    Closer kin, deeper in? No, too Southern...

    Ah, hell, I can't seem to find the moral of this story, but I sure as hell enjoyed reading it. *laughs* Twisted and cool, Bro.

    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      December 16, 2007
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      Thanks

      I'm not certain there is a moral, but thanks for looking Southern? I have a story about an incestial brother and sister who happen to eat campers in The Hills of West Virginia.

      This story isn't getting many comments, but perhaps that is a good thing. I'm very glad that you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading, commenting, and all the applause.

      Andy

  • V l
    December 13, 2007
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    I love it I love it very bloody and burtal.

    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      December 13, 2007
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      Thanks V L

      Thanks for reading and commenting. I'm very pleased that you like this story. I wish you much success with your vampire series. Good luck and good writing.

      Andy


  • CactusJack silver member
    December 11, 2007

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    Hmmm

    A young,open-minded, couple on vacation decide to visit a local massage parlor. The extra hundred bucks for the happy-ending is the least of their worries.
    Think Hostel meets Skinamax.
    Have fun!

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