Snow in Summer

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It was the summer of 2009. Ben was incredibly hot. The sun beamed down onto his bare neck, flies buzzed lazily around the garbage bins. Ben wiped his sweat covered head and shifted his green and blue sun-bed further under his umbrella. His younger sister splashed in her sea animal paddling pool in her pink bikini. A aeroplane flew over his garden and Ben became even border. All his friends had went on holiday and he was left by himself babysitting his sister. It was a beautiful day, but all his mates were at the beach at france.2

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 Suddnely a cold drop fell from the sky. He yelled at his sister," Stop splashing!!!!" but she was indoors. "Strange" he thought. More drops came when he reilased. It had started raining!!!!!! He looked up,"On a cloudless day. Weird!"4

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The rain became harder and harder, and soon enough he was forced to put his deckchair and umbrella in the house. He then sat down on the leather sofa and watched, "The suit life of zack and Cody." But when the rain turned into hail and the hail turned into snow he Began to get worried. Snow in summer. Thats impossible. Or is it?6

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Ben ran upstairs to his sister. She was playing on her new coputer game, Be the weather. On the game it was summer but his younger sister was making it snow. "Check this out",she said to him," Im making it snow in summer!!"8

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Ben had a brainstorm. Mabe his sister ws controling the weather, not just on the game, but in real life too!10

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Ben told his sister to turn the game into sunny mode and after that the sun came out and everything was back to normal.12

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When Bens parents came home and asked what he had done all Ben said" well if it gets cold, I know how to fix it!!!!!!!!!"14

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  • Andy Stephenson gold member
    December 9, 2007
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    Cute Story

    p2 'even more bored', 'friends had gone', p3 'realised, it had', p10 'Maybe his', p14 'done, all Ben said was, "Well, if'.

    This is a cute story. Is it summer where you are? So Ben's sister controls the weather. I'd like some summer here. Thanks for entering my contest.

    Andy


    • ilove2write
      December 10, 2007
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      Thanks for replying

      I wish it was summer here. No. I live near middlesbrough. It is winter here and freezzing!!

      Anyway thanks 4 replying. Good compitition