I Cannot Forget.

So many lies I have spread to my friends, and lies still try to escape my mouth. You craved everything I said, savored it. You couldn't read between the lines and you saw nothing but what I said.1

Everything I told you was a lie.2

The overdose? A lie. (I wanted your attention.)3

Corey and I? A lie. (I felt so alone.)4

Yet, I gave subtle hints about who I really was. You didn't catch them.5

And now when I tell you the truth, you push me away? Is this fair? Do I deserve this? I guess I do.6

I know I've hurt you, and I know I'm not worth your time.7

Just, please forgive me, for I cannot forget you.

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  • no1special
    November 30, 2004
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    This is so sad! If I were ... whoever this is you are writing to ... I would forgive you , because you took the time to writeout an apology! That was really sweet of you to do ... I hope allworks out for you! Keep up the great work!
    ~no1special~

  • Snowflake
    October 18, 2004
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    This is filled with sadness thats for sure...but telling the truth after a lie takes guts and you did that. No one is perfect. But asking for forgiveness is all one can do and if its not accepted then we must go on..Just like we have choices so does the other person..Doesn't make either person horrible..makes us human...Very Good Write.


  • Porcelain Doll
    October 18, 2004
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    I had a friend do the exact same thing... and I fell in love with him (her) so it was kinda hard.. lol but I don't blame them and I don't think the person should push youaway This is a good story
    ~Amy

  • pattyann4500
    October 18, 2004
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    Hauntingly real. Good work.