Hello Goodbye

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Hello, how is your subconscious2

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Say Goodbye, to the luxurious4

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Hola, como se llamas? ( hello what is you name/ what do you call yourself)6

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However you don't know what I mean8

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So I babble on in a foreign tongue10

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and you nod your head12

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Hello Goodbye, to the new14

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When the world is at an end, what can you do?16

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 Que pasa, como estas tu? ( what's up, how are you?)18

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Yet you still don't understand me any better than you did the last time.20

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What do you do when there is no registration in the mind.22

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Hello, how do you feel24

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Goodbye to a time of the real26

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!Que lastima! ( what a shame)28

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Hello, Goodbye to everything30

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  • Asfand
    December 22, 2007

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    Nice poem, like the emotions played ...

    Anyway, if you had seen the descriptiopns in the contest, it's for people who qualified in the Round x And Round I of the Poet's Challenge.

    Sorry, but of course I'll have to remove the poem ~



    G'luck.


    PS. If you would like to participate, put in your poem in the NEXT Qualifier's Round of Season II of the poet's Challenge.