The second she saw my room she gasped and started cleaning, moving piles, picking clothes off the floor because if she was going to sleep over, she needed some order out of the chaos that was my room. I protested, stretched out on my unmade bed and pointed to the Ying Yang symbol on my wall and told her she was upsetting the Chi flow of my room, that she was wasting precious few breaths on cleaning. She laughed and rolled her eyes at me and told me that was an excuse for the mess and I grinned and agreed.1
Author notes
"people should love people."
one out of three total, same idea each one.
final project for class.
100 words writing, yay!
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"she was wasting precious few breaths on cleaning" I think you left out a word...
I like it. Where's the rest? -
lemme guess... its about nessa any u. cute... though it seems kinda underdeveloped, that should be expected for 100 words. anyways nice job for short peice.
~manda -
its just a piece! i like it, but it just sounds like a begining, made me want to know what happens next. In just a few short sentences you've made both people real
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