Demonic Love pt 1?

" What have you done to me?" wimpered Dagon from the floor, hardly able to see through the blood running in rivers down his face. 1

Sedit looked in horror at her hands, which had caressed his body so many times before in the past, and had just brought about this excruciating pain that even Dagon could not stand. "I....I didnt realize...that it was you. I thought that..." she trailed off, still watching her love bleed all over. " im so hungry" she thought."But it cant be him...It cant be him..."2

" You thought what? that it wasnt me? who else comes to see you in this place?" he asked with accusing eyes3

Dagon wished instantly that he could take that remark back, if he had been able to think of anything but the pain, he would never have said such a stupid thing.4

Sedit looked at him, her normally white eyes turned completly black with her rage,then back to white instantly  "ti amo cosė tanto, io non posso lasciare che il passaggio di dichiarazione, media del didnt di i danneggiarlo voi, ma deve fare questo ultimo di dolore"5

Dagon screamed and writhed about on the floor, as even more of his black blood drenched through his already soaked skin, and all Sedit could do was watch.6

She remembered eternities ago, when she had first met Dagon in the ally behind what she considered hell. She remembered how a few years after their first meeting, how she had finally fallen in love with him, and him with her. She remembered that night where he disappeared, and how she realized in the end that it was not he that had disappeared, but her. She remembered how yesterday,He had come to see her in this very place,that only they knew about. How they had spent so many hours in this castle, wrapped entirely within each other. Finally, she remembered just a few hours ago, when he had walked in upon her, deep in concentration, and how she had mistakenly used an attack spell, thinking that Shamad had finally found her.  7

Sedit closed her eyes as what was left of her soul escaped her, and the demon within rose to control."im sorry" she said opening her eyes, which were now the color of the sky on a stormy day. 8

Dagon instantly feared for his very life" Sedit-" he started to say," I dont bla-" He never got to finish his sentence for Sedit had kneeled down in the pool of his blood, and kissed him with more passion then all the fairy tales in the world combined could have imagined. For a moment Dagon forgot where he was,forgot about the pain, forgot about everything exept the two of them, in that moment, forever. It was only when he felt himself weaken beneath her body that he knew instantly that this was no longer Sedit, his love, but the demon inside her filled with so much hate, one kiss from its lips would kill. 9

Sedit woke up to find herself drinking blood from the mouth of her dead Dagon.10

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i dont really know what this is about it just sort of came out so let me know if i should continue this, or if i should just pretend this never happened...

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  • Vampyric Lust
    October 18, 2004
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    that is exactly the mood i was in when i wrote this i didnt even no wut i was writing:-)

  • twistdilusion
    October 18, 2004
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    wow i really enjoyed reading that i was/am in a really sordid mood and that was just thrilling! it's the kind of thing you search for sort of like when your in the most f***ed up mood and all you want to do is listen to some deep heavy head throbbing screaming music well i thats' what this story was like for me it had so much... desire in it mwa mwa mwa brilliant!

  • Vampyric Lust
    October 17, 2004
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    lol thanks when t told me somebody commented on it i was so nervous i thought people would yell at me or somthing glad ta no i was wrong ;-)

  • Vampyric Lust
    October 17, 2004
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    it actually says something it doesnt directly translate but it says something like i love you but not im gunna hurt you even worse. lol thanks :-)

  • Diamond2007
    October 17, 2004
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    I actully really like this... I dunno why but its good... "ti amo cosė tanto, io non posso lasciare che il passaggio di dichiarazione, media del didnt di i danneggiarlo voi, ma deve fare questo ultimo di dolore"
    Curious to know... random typing or does it actully say something? anyways I like it great job


  • rindomai
    October 17, 2004
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    oh wow... just wow... i like the story, though... definately keep going and dont pretend it never happened! lol i like it... its different from all the other demon stories... and its got its bit of romance and horror so its good by me keep going!!

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