Today, the sky was gray, and the world seemed cold. Outside, she thought, was not the place for her. Still she had to go and see what the day would bring. 1
Onward she went, but all was not right. The world as she had known it, it seems, had gone away. All was black, and the people had been replaced with hideous demonic creatures. 2
She began to run, trying to find her way back home, but it seemed that her home was gone. She was alone, in a hideous world that she could not understand. 3
What had happened? Had she died and gone to hell? Was this her eternal punishment and torment? Tired, alone and defeated, the girl stopped and wept. 4
What would become of her now? The problem was she knew no one would miss her and that no one would care. If she had died, or been taken to another world, she realized no one would ever mourn her. 5
More alone then she had ever felt before, she looked up and saw a small stream in front of her. Thirsty, she walked to the stream to get a drink. As she leaned down to get some water she noticed her reflection. 6
She too was a hideously deformed beast, just like all of those that she had seen. 7
She screamed as she realized she was in hell. Her greatest fear had been realized. 8
She was just like everyone else.9
Author notes
I thought of this when I was at the mall one day!
What did you think? Please comment!
Comments
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LoL... at the mall, huh? That's pretty funny.
Anyway, this sounds horribly scary.... sad to know the mall is such hell.. LoL... I guess it sort of is in a way... You max out that credit card and all is downhill from there.
Ok, this one will be the last comment for now, cuz I know I bombarded you. And I know I told you the last one was going to be the last one, but i liked your work so much that I had to read one more.. -
Thanks alot. I was reading some of your work and I enjoyed alot of it.
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hey man nice poem really good meanin to it at the end so cya round da site
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wow...i loved how you wrote this. it was great and i loved it. how you refered to everyone as creatures and she was one too like everyohe in relation to being acceptied was great. good job and keep it up!!!1~~ Jasmine ~~
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