It is amazing
Your eyes on mine
Capturing the sparkling moment
Enraptured in emerald green
I miss the way they danced
Created scenery amongst the Autumn Leaves
Now there passing right by me
Alone in the street
How long ago had I lost you?
How long ago did you leave me now?
Author notes
Your Gardian Angel
female.
ever had one of those moments, were; someone you knew for a long time but haven't seen for just as long, walks by and your eyes catch for a moment and all these memories rush by and you wonder.....how long has it been? I miss her/him.
A contest entry
- Ten Minute -or less- Entries (You have ten minutes, don't ya?) by Taylor Renee.
350 points, ended December 15, 2007, 34 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
so what do you think?
Comments
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Oh, this is so absolutely beautiful!
Sort of sad, but deep & written very well!
(And, of course, you followed the rules!! That's always great!)
This is very poetic, which I LOVE, and is just what I wanted.
You're author's notes are really great, too.
This is an awesome entry
Thanks, so much, for taking the time for my contest, and good luck!!
xoxo
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Tay
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i loved this.
i can relate.
good job.
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