"Question Mark on a Chalkboard"

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A sea of burnt grass,2

The serpent silently stalks its prey,3

Slithers ever closer,4

The white mouse sits with ears perked.5

Ever closer the snake slithers,6

It rears ready to strike,7

Suddenly the two were frozen in time.

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  • Shadow06
    March 31, 2008
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    A very interesting poem, Assura.