He said; "Pretty girls like you should never cry..."1
Hah, you know; I find it kinda funny, how men can say all these things, yet in translation, it all means "you can cry all you want; you're just another girl to me" and they can move on with their lives like nothing happened. Even their promises meant nothing to begin with. Yet one after another, it's always the same story, and we always manage to fall for them. I admit women can be the same, and I know men have feelings too, but when they're all emotional with you while you're together, it all changes when you break up, they act like nothing's wrong. 2
He was there for me when I wasn't able to speak; only cry. He put his arms around me and didn't let go until I promised him I'd be alright. I remember him telling me that night "never cry over me, I'm not worth the tears" I didn't say anything to him, just nodded my head quietly and layed it back on his shoulder, while he gripped my waist tighter.3
He was there when something happened to my bestfriend, he didn't say a word to me for almost 20 minutes. He just put his arms around me and held so tight; as if he were afraid he was going to lose me. He didn't try to hold on too tight when he was losing me September 30th.4
I remember when I was sick during the summer, I didn't have the energy to do anything, he came over every day and did anything to make me smile. He never intentionally made me cry, and I never placed blame on the times I did cry while I was with him. I still don't.5
He doesn't know this, and if he reads this, then he'll know... But I really loved him. And again, there goes me falling for something that could only have been in a fairy tale. And for those 67 days I was with him, it felt like a dream. It was pure perfection. And now, I don't know what to say when I talk to him. It feels like I've woken up, and it was all just a nightmare. But when I look back on the dream, I realize it was real, and it's the best feeling I've ever had...6
"Pretty girls like you. Should never cry" That's what he never said to me.
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This is really good. I think about everyone can relate to this..I know that I can. You did a good job expressing how you felt...great job! keep it up!
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Thank yoouuuu
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This is a very nice sad. Everyone can relate to being hurt during a break up, you did a very good job of capturing that feeling.
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kati-lynn! i can't think of any words to comment on this story other then absolutly amazing. blew me away! love you lots
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Thanks, I know it isn't a story, but I posted it as a story because it isn't really a poem...I don't know...I just posted it in story write
thanks for the comment though!
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Kati. xox
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that is so sad...it really hit me and i'm so sorry that you feel this way....I hope everything works out for you...because this piece is truly touching and although short and not really a story..its still sweet and emotional....great write...keep it up...Luv Caz
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thanks, i wasn't aiming for perfection, or style...i was aiming towards getting my feelings out without hurting myself...
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not my taste
boys are so stupid, pretty girls like you should never cry over stupid boys <3 -
strange how that works... i like that "pretty girls like you should never cry" theme... its something that guys say a lot... and yet for him not to have said it despite what he did for you... yeah, its a bit strange. good luck... i hope things get better...
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Gobsmacked.
Amazing...
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