So yeah, it can be inappropriate at times, but come on, Chobits is good at it's very core.1
That's what I've been telling my mom for the past year ever since the fateful day at Half - Price Books where she almost bought me the first two volumes until she saw it was OT.2
And blast it, I'm pretty sure FMLYHM and No Jesus Christ aren't that bad. I've heard No Jesus Christ, but I could miss out on a good song by not getting to listen to FMLYHM.3
No one ask what the songs are, they're by Seether, who like, no one knows. Which kind of got me in the situation of having to be a fellow freak to actually be my friend. Well, those girls where stupid popular girls, but bad news travels fast around Intermedeate Schools. She's a freak, they call him gay, but they're all idiots.4
Most humans I know are.5
What I'm trying to say is I'm tired of being told no because of age, and I'm tired of being pushed by people who have a higher "place in this world" then me.6
Is they're anything wrong with everyday telling people, "Fai's not actually Fai. Fai's dead. The Fai we know is actually his twin brother who's pretending to be Fai." and always spelling schizophrenia, yelling, "S-C-H-I-Z-O-P-H-R-E-N-I-A"?7
No they're isn't. Not at all.8
Or the line "Put the gun in my mouth/and pull the tirgger/I feel so alive./Put the gun in my mouth/it tastes so bitter.9
But I'm only 11, so no one cares.10
It's the apocalypse. 11
The Earth is breaking apart.12
The suns dying everyday.13
Global warming is killing us.14
We whine about we caused.15
We're all idiots.16
We do it because we're human and we're not perfect.17
Nothing is.18
No Jesus Christ.
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Recording of 'Yuzuki' talking to the school counsler, 20
9/27/06
2:49 P.M.
Author notes
I never actually said any of this, though I do always spell schizophrenia and repeat that qoute everyday.
I do feel un-appreciated for age.
I do want to read Chobits.
I do want to listen to FMLYHM and No Jesus Christ.
I want to be accepted.
~Brooke Sanders
A contest entry
- For Writers 14 And Under Only!!! by Andy Stephenson.
175 points, ended December 13, 2007, 20 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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"Well, I'm not familiar with the things you mention in this story, so I am rather at a loss. Perhaps you could translate. Thanks for entering my contest. Sorry, but I am confused by this story."
I tend to make refrences.
Okay:
Chobits: Chobits is a manga by CLAMP, my favorite manga group. Anyway, Chobits is rated OT for the fact that there can be refrences to sexuality or porn and stuff.
Seether/FMLYHM/No Jesus Christ: Seether is a heavy Rock/metal rock band from Africa. They're a 'Parental Advisory' band, and many of the songes can be inappropriate for 'little 11 year olds like me'.
FMLYHM a.k.a F*ck Me Like You Hate Me is a yet unknown song, so I can't exactly say what's wrong with it.
No Jesus Christ is what you can call profane. Such as the line I mentioned, "Put the gun in my mouth/and pull the tirgger/I feel so alive./Put the gun in my mouth/it tastes so bitter".
Fai D. Flowright/Yuui: Fai/Yuui is a fictional character of the manga Tsubasa RESERvoir CHRoNiCLE (By CLAMP). He is first known as Fai D. Flowright until his past is revealed and is shown as Yuui, Fai's twin brother, the only one of which survived. That's what my line about Fai is about.
That should be about it. You can ask about anything else that's not exactly clear. -
Hmm?
Well, I'm not familiar with the things you mention in this story, so I am rather at a loss. Perhaps you could translate. Thanks for entering my contest. Sorry, but I am confused by this story.
Andy
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This is good and well written. I think it gets the point across well that sometimes age really doesn't matter and people need to stop acting like age is all important. You did a very good job
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