~[The New Host Club]~-chapter 1 part 1

~[The New Host Club]~-chapter 1 part 11

Usagi peeked through the door outside of a room, a frown on her face.2

She sighed deeply and closed the door quietly.3

"There are like four reading rooms, but why is it noisy everywhere?"4

"I mean, not like i don't like noise, it's just that. It's for reading not talking."5

Usagi stared out the giant window, seeing a couple of doves fly by.6

Mother and father in heaven...it's been 9 years since i've seen you...rich kids all seem like they're here to play, not to study or learn.7

Usagi stopped walking as she approached a room.8

The Third Music Room9

"Music room...?" Usagi murmered.10

Her lips curved into a fainst smile.11

"A music room not being used...i can study and play music.."12

She put her small hand on the door handle and twisted it.13

She pushed it open and peered inside as the door creaked.14

When she saw the inside of the room, she could see nothing but white.15

But then rose petals swirled together like a vortex and blew away after exiting the door.16

Usagi held a face of confusion.17

She looked around to see if anyone witnessed this, but no one was there.18

"Welcome."19

Usagi snapped her head back to the room, seeing six distant figures appearing.20

"What the..."21

She saw five people standing and one sitting in a chair, his legs crossed.22

"....hell...?"23

Ouran private academy is defined by...one. prestigious familes. and two. wealth. And prosperous people have much time on their hands.24

Therefore this Ouran Host Club is about...these handsome guys that have time...giving hospitality to these lovely ladies who also have time...and profit off of them. 25

It's an elegant game to this super-rich school.26

Tick...tock..tick...27

"Host club...?" Usagi blinked confusedly, cocking her head sideways.28

"What is this? A guy or a girl?"29

"Alphonse, Edward. You two are in the same class as this guest, correct?" spoke a young man with light brown hair and hazelnut eyes.30

"Yeah, but.." Alphonse spoke,31

"This person doesn't speak a lot really." Edward said32

"So we really don't know him or her well." they finished off, shrugging.33

The young man stared at them, before closing his eyes, grinning.34

"Heh.."35

pop!36

One out of six light bulbs went on.37

Usagi stared weirdly at them, twitching her eye.38

"Welcome to the Host club. Special student."39

The man sitting in the chair popped up in front of him and stared at Usagi.40

"What?! So he or she's that exceptional special student, Usagi Yuri?"41

By now Usagi's back was against the door as her hand rattled the door handle to get out.42

"Ehehe...um..maybe i should be going by now..."43

Usagi stopped shaking the door handle, and slowly turned to the host members.44

"H-how do you know my n-name..?"45

"Well, the way this school works makes it hard for commoners to get in."46

Usagi's mouth twitched in annoyance at these words.47

"They say it's pretty hard to be accepted as a special student unless you are a studious bookworm."48

"Eehh...i don't know what to say.."49

Inside Usagi was freaking out, raviously ripping apart everything in sight.50

"yes! Or in other words, you are a hero, Yuri-san! Even if you are the number one student in your class, you are by far the most poor student in the school!"51

Usagi had enough and started to side step away, but the young man noticed and followed slowly.52

"Others might think of you as a low civilian."53

"No, im not as bad as your making me sound!" Usagi protested in her defense.54

"Come on, why not? All hail poverty!"55

He put an arm around Usagi's shoulders, and drew her closer to him.56

"Welcome to our elegant world, pauper!"57

Usagi ignored him and started walking back to the door.58

"Excuse me, but i have to be somewhere."59

She was about to walk out before she was pulled back by a blonde male with three whisker lines on each cheek.60

"Ne, Usagi-chan, Usagi-chan! Your a hero...?" His azure eyes glimmered with joy.61

"That's awesome!"62

Usagi sweatdropped, trying to pry his arm off of hers.63

"A special student, not a hero."64

Usagi stopped, noticed the nick name he gave her.65

"WAIT?! WHO ARE YOU CALLING USAGI-CHAN?!?!"66

The blonde closed his eyes and fell backwards, letting go of Usagi.67

Usagi huffed and breathed heavily, exhausted.68

"But i never expected the famous bookworm to be gay."69

Gay....gay.....gay.....gay...70

Usagi twitched, stopping to breath heavily.71

"...Gay...?"72

"So, what type do you fancy?"73

Usagi twitched even more, this time along with her eye.74

"The sweet type?"75

He pointed to a male with dark black hair and eyes with bags under them, his finger close to his lips.76

"The dreamy type?"77

He pointed to the blonde with the three whisker marks who looked at Usagi.78

"The Prodigy type?"79

He this time pointed to the two male's in Usagi's class, Alphonse and Edward.80

Edward had blonde hair in a braid with side bangs, and stunning golden eyes.81

Alphonse had dirty blonde hair and forest green eyes.82

They had their arms crossed and leaned back to back.83

"The smart type?"84

He showed you the male who knew you and he smirked.85

Usagi was freaked out and backed away.86

"N-no!!!"87

"I was just looking for a quiet place to study and possibly play music!"88

HE came closer to Usagi and put her chin in his hand,89

Usagi shivered and her eyes widened.90

"Or...how about you try me? Wanna go?"91

HE rubbed his finger against Usagi's chin.92

Usagi jumped backwards, but lost her balance and fell into a small table with a vase on it.93

SHe knocked it over, and noticed.94

She quickly caught it in her hands, and sighed relieved.95

She was about to stand up, before.96

The vase slipped out of her hands and shattered onto the ground.97

"Aahh.." Edward and Alphonse sighed, leaning behind Usagi.98

"Tsuki's flower vase that was the target of our in-school auction..." Alhponse spoke99

"That's not good...and we thought we could have reaped up to eight million yen with this..." Edward finished off.100

Usagi stiffened in shock.101

"EIGHT MILLION YEN?!?!"102

"Wat, how many thousand is that.."103

She dropped her head counting with her fingers.104

"How many thousands makes eight million.."105

Usagi slowly stood up, her hands placed on the top of the small table.106

"Anou...about paying for this.."107

"Are you able to?" Edward and Alphonse asked.108

"Someone who can't even buy a designated uniform," they both said109

"Besides, what with that stupid outfit?" Edward said rudely.110

"What should we do, Deidara?" the man who was known as the 'smart type' inquired.111

'Deidara', as he was know known sat down in his chair again, crossing his legs.112

"Have you heard of this saying, Yuri-san. When in Rome do as the Romans do. If you don't have the money, then work it off."113

Usagi stared disbelievingly at him.114

"Starting today you're...The Host Club's Dog!"115

Usagi had a blank look on her face.116

D-dog..? This is terrible, mom, dad..117

The Host club gathered around Usagi, the brothers leaning towards you, Deidara waving his hand, L standing there along with Light, and Naruto poking Usagi.118

As Naruto poked Usagi, she fell over like a noodle.119

This is terrible mom, dad. I've been capture by the host club..120

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  • Thorndragon
    October 6
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    it's funny

    Like I said it's funny! I like it!


  • Len Shadow
    January 16

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    Ha ha! I knew every character in this but Usagi. (Which anime is she from?)
    Good thing Al is a human, pretty sure an empty suit of armor wouldn't be very popular. (Oh and his eyes are brown, not green. I know that for a fact.)


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    December 16, 2007

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    Welcome to StoryWrite and

    Thanks for your entry. I am not entirely familiar with your story line and it seems that it may be steep in some fan fiction that I am not aquainted with. It was a good story all the same with a surprise ending. The only thing that I didn't like was too many paragraph breaks. It seems that every sentence in the entire story is a separate paragraph. That worked well with the dialogue but in other places it was very distracting.

    Still I enjoyed reading it. Best of luck in the contest.

  • Glomp-Bishies
    December 7, 2007
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    Thank you!


  • Andy Stephenson gold member
    December 7, 2007
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    Hmm.

    I'm not familiar with Naruto. This was rather a strange story to me. She was kidnapped. It seems to be pretty well written, but I didn't really understand this story. Thanks for entering the December's New Member Contest. I hope you enjoy Storywrite.

    Andy

  • Glomp-Bishies
    December 3, 2007
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    lol .xDD i always glomp Edo. so much fun.

  • Glomp-Bishies
    December 2, 2007
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    yesh, vampires. ^-^ rofl. xDD -is glomped- YAY GLOMPS!!!!!!!

  • Glomp-Bishies
    December 2, 2007
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    ROFL, yes, Naruto's like Honey. x33 same here! xDD i started this story yesterday on quizilla, im also going to post up a vampire series that has eighteen chapters. @.@ xDD rofl xDD


    • Dreams of Insanity
      December 2, 2007
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      V-V-V-VAMPIRES! *bows down* You must be my god or something! I think...I think I luff you! *glomples you*

  • Dreams of Insanity
    December 2, 2007

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    Naruto's like Honey!? KYAHAHAHAHA! I loved that! I wasn't expecting that one! OMG! I was just watching this episode yesterday! Now I have to put it back on! Weeeee!

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