Tonight she will be mine.

Tonight she will be mine.1

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I watch you through your bedroom window
undressing for my eyes.
I smell the blood pumping through such innocent veins,
tonight Maria, you will be mine.4

Sleeping naked under satin sheets.
I enter, an open window, silently.5

You awake; I hide my teeth but bare my hardness
to your curious, widened eyes.
Moving swiftly and undressing myself quickly I climb over and
spread your toned smooth legs.
Your hand goes to my throbbing hardness, so ready for you.6

I push forward, finding your wetness and desire to feel me.
Your nails sink into my arse and push me deeper. 7

If only my slave, you knew I now have the scent of blood.
Even if it is my own.8

I find your hardened nipples and tease with squeezes.9

Soon I shall taste every part of you.10

I move you, your clit is rubbing against me, you moan and pussy muscles
begin to tighten. I ache to cum, start to feel it so I hold you closer,
and fuck even harder.11

The only words you spoke that night “You devil, oh shit yesssssss, I’m cumming”!12

With my final thrust, my juices free- flowing.
I bare my teeth and smile wickedly as fear arrives in your eyes.
A hand goes to your mouth not wanting
to hear the seconds away, screams.
I lower myself to your damp neck, moving your soft hair
aside I give not even a glance.
Sucking on your sweet nectar, I grunt and
still I hold your breast.13

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Author notes

Author notes
option 2:I want you to be a vampire or an evil creature of some sort and make love to me. Erotic is fine. Make sure it has plenty of detail. A Poem I wrote for an AP Contest, with the mentioned option .

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Comments


  • MsAlee gold member
    December 16, 2008
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    wow, very well written.


  • xBitterxSweetx
    December 2, 2007

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    wow i really liked this poem. It was very discriptive and the words seem to just leap out of the page. LOL But as a suggestion, I would try to keep the rhythm the same all throughout the poem. It seems to fall out of it near the end.


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      December 2, 2007
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      Thank you
      There was not meant to be any rhyming, so it may just be one or two that you have noticed. I understand what your saying and I will have a look but for the most part I am happy with how it reads etc etc

      Thanks again for a lovely comment

      Cindy