A Funeral So Near

I feel the hunger1

of a feeling2

never felt3

seeping in4

through my bones. 5

Alien to my heart,6

now void 7

of any joy,8

I feel this feeling 9

seeping in.10

Yearning for the touch11

of a joy never felt,12

I long for the end13

to be near.14

Only once15

will this joy16

sweep into my life,17

at a funeral so near-18

nearer than a dream19

in the dark of the night.20

I long 21

for the end22

to my tireless hunger23

for an emotion24

never experienced25

so that finally26

it may come27

with a hope of28

darkness29

and death, but no more.

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Hi...

Am I too depressed or am I normal?

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  • Dreams of Insanity
    December 1, 2007

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    I really don't think you're depressed, and trust me I know depressed. Behind this bubbly mask I put on lies a crying girl who can't even bring herself to face the world anymore. So I don't think you're depressed to be honest, but you know what they say. Your thoughts are just how you project yourself.

    This was a good read. I liked it a lot, good job.