Konaha [part 1]

Mizuki was walking along the edge of the village. She was waiting for someone to come from the outside of the village and she was starting to worry. He was supposed to be there during the morning but it was almost night now. She paced around a little bit more before she gave up and started running towards the village. She had to find out if she misheard him or something. She was scared to no end and didn’t notice the man following her. She jumped over a log and into some wire that she couldn’t see. Someone pulled on the wire pulling her back. They wrapped the wire around her so it constricted her body. She started to struggle trying to get to her kuni knife but they tightened the wire making her yelp in pain. She started to cry. She had to find him. She couldn’t die unless she knew he was dead.
“Ha! You said I couldn’t do it! You said I couldn’t catch you! Well now I have and there’s nothing you can do about it!” She looked up at the person and scowled.
“LET ME GO, NARUTO! I’M NOT UP FOR YOUR ANTICS RIGHT NOW!” She shouted with a tear stricken face. She struggled some more before she gave up and glared at Naruto through the slits she had made her eyes into.
“Hey, calm down why don’t ya. I don’t see what your problem is. Shesh, someone would mistake you for a PMSing woman.” He said while removing the wire. As soon as the wire was gone, she jumped up and tackled him. She punched him in the face and started to run back to the village. Naruto started to run after her. When Mizuki reached the village gates she jumped up and over them. She looked around to find out what direction she had to go. She found the direction she need to go and ran. She busted through the doors and looked at the occupant.
“Where the fuck is my brother.” Mizuki asked trying to hold her fear and anger down. The occupant looked up at her.
“Just calm down. He should have been back by now, though.” The person responded.
“You don’t even know where he is and you want me to calm down? I WANT to know where my brother is and I want to know NOW, Tsunande!” Mizuki was slowly losing her control, which wouldn’t turn out very well. Tsunande got up and walked over to her. When she went to but her hand on Mizuki’s shoulder, she backed away and glared at her.
“Don’t you dare lay a hand on me! EVER!” She screamed.
“Look, I understand how you feel, Mizuki. Trust me I really do but you need to calm down before you hurt someone…or yourself for that matter.” Tsunande said with concern.
“I want my brother…And if you won’t help find him then I will find him myself!” She ran out of the room and down the stairs, knocking Naruto over in the process. She didn’t care that he was ‘cussing’ her out or that he was chasing after her. She wanted her brother and she had been through to much to let him die. She would find a way. Naruto had finally caught up to her.
“The heck is your problem?! You’ve been on this rampage all day!” He asked finally ticked off.
“Stay out of it, you annoying, hyper-active, little brat! Get your own life and stop medaling in mine!” She tripped him are continued to run. She had reached the edge of the village again when she was caught by wire…again. She cursed under her breath as the wire was wrapped around her…again. She struggled against the wire not liking being caught.
“Who the fuck has me now!?” She yelled more than asked. When she didn’t hear anything she struggled more. ‘I have to find my brother! I just have to!’ She yelled in her mind as she finally had a good hold on her kuni. She cut the wire and tried to run again but was pushed back as a net held her down. “DAMNIT!”
“Calm down, will you?” A man said.
“Stop playing games with my head you lazy bastard!” She yelled.
“I would stop playing games if you would stop yelling.” The man came into sight and looked at her.
“You cry but you’re mad to hell and back. I don’t know how you do that but it’s interesting.” He said in a calm voice.

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  • Kyoshoro Wolf
    January 13, 2008

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    That was a good fanfic.It seems Naruto is always making trouble.I wonder who was that man.I just have to read and find out.


  • Bullet.Name
    November 30, 2007
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    Hhmmm.....it's good but ya got soem things to work out here. But it's awsome!still.


    • Wild Fire
      December 3, 2007
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      What do you mean, work out? I'm hyped right now from brownies.