my dream has come true.

he takes my hand leading me to i don't know where. he has already blindfolded me. i here the shower being turned on in the bathroom. i smile a little smile. wanting the delights i know are in store for me. he slowly undresses me. 1

he delights in pleasurably torturing me to the breaking point. he picks me up from the ground, nuzzling his kisses on my neck. he takes me into the shower and sets me down. thank god the shower is big. i know he is undressing when i hear him unzip his pants. and i am thinking of the pleasure i will give him in return.2

he gets in and closes the curtain. he takes me in his arms and possesses my mouth with more passion than i remember. he slowly parts my lips with his tongue, massaging mine with his. we kiss lingeringly, as he begins to trail the kisses down my eager body. i moan with such pleasure as never before. he sucks on my already erect nipples, and i give a little cry of ecstasy. he kisses them before returning to his erotic torture.3

he finds my center and softly slides his tongue in and out of it. i fall against the wall of the shower already going crazy from the havoc he is recking on my body. he continues with his little caresses on my bottom, just gentley sliding his hands around it.4

i reach my climax and i am clinging to him as i feel my legs melting to the floor below. he holds onto me in return telling me with just a look in his eyes that i am more precious to him than anything else in the world. i kiss him lightly on the lips, before i begin my possesion of his entire being. i slide my hands up and down his back still clinging to him with eagerness. i take my caresses with my hands down to his manhood and begin  to slowly massage it with all the loving i have to offer him. he moans, and begins to writhe beneath me. i tell him to calm down, he says to me it's impossible when something feels so good. 5

when he crys out with ecstatic pleasure. he looks me directly in the eye and i flash him my little tempting smile. as if i am saying to him did i do something wrong or are you just looking for more. he sits down on the shower floor and straddles me on top of him. he kisses my mouth with more passion than i ever thought possible probing his tongue in and out. he sucks on my tongue and i pry out of it so i can massage him with my hands and just lightly kiss him at the same time.6

he knows i am moist and ready for him to take full possesion of me and lay down his claim for my heart and soul. he slides in to me with love and lust. more love than anything, and that is what i crave. we are rythmically moving together and i moan against his shoulder almost crying with pleasure. he keeps on thrusting into me with such force that i cannot help but scream out my ecstatic approovel. he gives  such a force ful thrust that i am literally driven to heaven by all the ecstasy that he is giving me.7

he gives one last grateful thrust into me and i fall apart in his arms. he clings to me as if he is now the one who will fall into oblivion without me. we know it has taken far to little time to make love but we are grateful for any lovemaking that we do. we are completly sated from the intercourse we have just shared and completly shaken from the intense erotic pleasure of it all. this is one time we will never forget.8

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  • ZorroTheFox silver member
    January 12, 2005
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    wow, long and hot, just the way I like it. I could read this one over and over again. In fact I think I'll start right now. keep up the gooooood work

  • AngelOfMusic44
    October 21, 2004
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    nto really on experience i admitt, but from reading way way way to many harlequin presents romance books. anyways thanx for the comment.

  • Pinkypants
    October 21, 2004
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    Steamy baby yeah!

    Woooah there! This is fantasticly steamy i hope this was written on experience LMAO excellent story and well written erotica

  • Miss Faerie
    October 17, 2004
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    this is a great piece. very vivid and affective. im impressed. i love the choice of words and images. they created a great picture in my mind.

  • AngelOfMusic44
    October 14, 2004
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    aawww thanx so much i really appreciate ur guy's comments.

  • Nicole Hanna
    October 14, 2004
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    This is good not because it's just good erotica, but because you focus on the LOVE here too, which is very refreshing to see. You get explicit, but honestly no more so than a romance novel, lol, and I liked that... I like how soft and subtle this was and not in-your-face porn like so many writers on this site adhere to. This was well done. I would suggest capitalizing the beginning of your sentences, but other than that, this was really enjoyable.


  • ms-vengeance silver member
    October 14, 2004
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    yea, this is hot! lol, i've never had sex in the shower, because i'm just so damn shy, but this makes me definitly want to give it a go sometime, lol. yea, maybe. this it awesome, hot!
    sweetdemise


  • CrimsonFlower
    October 13, 2004
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    ahhh ohhh soooo hottttttt
    i love it completely you
    did awesome on this...
    got me hot and wanting my BF
    but cant im on tha dreaded rag...lol TMI
    once again thx for your wonderful comments...
    ttyl~jess

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