The Darkness (Part One)

"Somebody please, help me!" she screamed. No echo, her voice did not travel far. The only sounds for miles were the rumbling waters that lay below her like a roaring lion. Her hands were cut and bleeding from the trembling grasp she held onto for dear life. 1

"Aaaah!" She clenched the sharp rocks tighter as she could feel herself beginning to slip. "Help me," she shouted again, but still, there was no answer. 2

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To be continued..........

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  • Crazy-Teddy666
    November 29, 2007
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    wow i likeit so far keep writing
    Paige