Jen walked through the doors and threw her keys on the table. Hanging up her jacket with a sigh. Her girlfriend, Meg, came out of the kitchen with a cloth in her hand.1
"How was work babe?"2
"Stressful", Jen said with a frown.3
"Want to talk about it? I have supper ready."4
"Naw, that's ok. What are we having?"5
"Tacos again. Sorry."6
"It's ok, I love your tacos."7
"Yeah, but they've been our leftovers for 2 nights in a row now."8
"It's ok babe. Tomorrow we'll order chinese, my treat." Meg smiled.9
They ate supper in silence and when they finished Meg cleared the table. While she was washing the dishes Jen came up behind her and put her arms around her waste, kissing her on the neck. Meg noticed a slight urgency in Jens' actions. She turned around the face her and asked10
"You sure there isn't anything you want to talk about?"11
Jen sighed in frustration12
"Please babe, I don't want to talk about it, lets just be together."13
"We are..."14
Jen couldn't be mad at Meg, she only wanted to help. Jen just wanted to forget her problems, she was tired of always crying to Meg. She wanted to be strong, even though she felt weak.15
Thought, at least Jen had work off tomorrow so she could spend time with Meg. Meg was working hard to become a photographer so Jen promised she'd pose for her.16
When morning rolled around Jen woke up to Meg brushing her teeth in the bathroom. Jen closed her eyes and groaned,17
"Are you sure you wanna take pics today? We could lay in bed all day. That sounds nice doesn't it?"18
Meg called around the bathroom door,19
"Maybe if you hadn't been so eager last night you might not be so tired."20
Meg walked out of the bathroom and threw some jeans and a cut-off baseball T at Jen.21
"What? Do they inspect the subjects clothing too?" moaned Jen.22
"Naw babe, I just love those jeans on you and that t-shirt gives you a comfortable look."23
"Well, in that case..." Jen slid out of bed and grabbed the clothes to go take a shower.24
While Jen was in the shower Meg slipped in the bathroom and took a picture of Jen with her hair wet and water running down her neck. Jen jumped at the flash and about slipped in the shower while Meg was giggling and laughing. Jen scowled and said25
“I had no idea one of your assignments was porn. Tell me, do I get to keep my clothes on for the rest?”. Meg made a face at her and left the bathroom.26
Meg and Jen started walking to the park that was 4 blocks away. Meg had her camera in her left hand and Jen’s hand in her right. On the way Meg talked about what kind of pictures she wanted to take. Their main goal was to capture emotions in vividness.27
“So, you should be a natural Jen.” She giggled.28
Jen frowned,29
“What’s that supposed to mean?”.30
Meg smiled and squeezed her hand to reassure her.31
“Only that you’re the most expressive person I know. It’s extremely obvious by the look on your face if you want something.” Jen smiled.32
Meg stopped walking and Jen walked to a tree and sat down under it. Meg got ready with her camera and Jen stuck her tongue out at her.33
“Come on, real emotion. Sticking your tongue out at someone isn’t real emotion. Give me something real...errr...Show me how you look when we’re together...Breathless.” The both smiled.34
Jen leaned against the tree and closed her eyes. She pictured Meg in her arms and surprising her with a kiss. Jen put a hand up to her chest and neck and took a deep breath with her eyes still closed and her brow slightly furrowed. Meg snapped the picture.35
“That was awesome baby, very realistic!”36
Jen smiled, then thought of work. She looked down and tried to summon everything she felt about it. She looked up with a tear in her eye and a genuine depressed look about her and Jen snapped another picture.37
“Whoa, that was intense. Sure you’re ok, baby?”38
“Of course...I’m only posing. Was that ok?” she said in a slightly shaky voice but Meg didn’t catch it.39
“No, it was perfect. It just worried me was all.”40
Jen stood up and started walking through the leaves with her hands in her pockets looking down. Meg shot another pic and started to regain her enthusiasm. Jen ran to a bench and layed down giving the camera a sly look as she tried to look sexy. Meg laughed and shot apic. Jen grinned and Meg shot another one. Jen kept up the pace for half the day then declared they go back home. Meg agreed being satisfied with her pictures.41
When they got there they called the chinese place to have an early supper. An order of Princess chicken, fried rice, crab rangoon, hot and sour soup, and of course fortune cookies. They both walked together to pick up the chinese and Jen payed as she said she would. Meg practically ran home cuz the smell was driving her insane.42
As they were eating Meg voiced her thoughts,43
“I deem these little chinese cases ‘MAGIC’ chinese cases. They look soooo small. But then I have no idea how they get so much fried rice inside. It’s crazy!”44
Jen giggled at her and called her silly. Meg made a face and poked Jen in the side. Jen squeaked and twisted under Meg’s touch. Jen looked into Meg’s eyes and Meg cocked an eyebrow with a slight grin. Meg suddenly leaped out of her chair and over the coffee table, tackling Jen on the couch. She tickled her until Jen begged her to stop. Meg smiled at Jen and looked into her eyes. She suddenly became serious and planted a hard kiss on Jen’s lips. Jen kissed back. They stopped and peered into each others eyes. Meg was crying.45
“Baby, what’s wrong?” Jen said frowning.46
“You know I know something is wrong at work. Please tell me. I want to help. Whatever it is, you know we’re in this together. I can’t stand to see the look on your face when you think I’m not looking. I don’t want this to ruin you by keeping it inside. Please babe, I’m right here.” She hugged Jen. Jen had tears in her eyes47
“You remember that guy Joe, at work?”48
“Yeah, what about him?”
"How was work babe?"2
"Stressful", Jen said with a frown.3
"Want to talk about it? I have supper ready."4
"Naw, that's ok. What are we having?"5
"Tacos again. Sorry."6
"It's ok, I love your tacos."7
"Yeah, but they've been our leftovers for 2 nights in a row now."8
"It's ok babe. Tomorrow we'll order chinese, my treat." Meg smiled.9
They ate supper in silence and when they finished Meg cleared the table. While she was washing the dishes Jen came up behind her and put her arms around her waste, kissing her on the neck. Meg noticed a slight urgency in Jens' actions. She turned around the face her and asked10
"You sure there isn't anything you want to talk about?"11
Jen sighed in frustration12
"Please babe, I don't want to talk about it, lets just be together."13
"We are..."14
Jen couldn't be mad at Meg, she only wanted to help. Jen just wanted to forget her problems, she was tired of always crying to Meg. She wanted to be strong, even though she felt weak.15
Thought, at least Jen had work off tomorrow so she could spend time with Meg. Meg was working hard to become a photographer so Jen promised she'd pose for her.16
When morning rolled around Jen woke up to Meg brushing her teeth in the bathroom. Jen closed her eyes and groaned,17
"Are you sure you wanna take pics today? We could lay in bed all day. That sounds nice doesn't it?"18
Meg called around the bathroom door,19
"Maybe if you hadn't been so eager last night you might not be so tired."20
Meg walked out of the bathroom and threw some jeans and a cut-off baseball T at Jen.21
"What? Do they inspect the subjects clothing too?" moaned Jen.22
"Naw babe, I just love those jeans on you and that t-shirt gives you a comfortable look."23
"Well, in that case..." Jen slid out of bed and grabbed the clothes to go take a shower.24
While Jen was in the shower Meg slipped in the bathroom and took a picture of Jen with her hair wet and water running down her neck. Jen jumped at the flash and about slipped in the shower while Meg was giggling and laughing. Jen scowled and said25
“I had no idea one of your assignments was porn. Tell me, do I get to keep my clothes on for the rest?”. Meg made a face at her and left the bathroom.26
Meg and Jen started walking to the park that was 4 blocks away. Meg had her camera in her left hand and Jen’s hand in her right. On the way Meg talked about what kind of pictures she wanted to take. Their main goal was to capture emotions in vividness.27
“So, you should be a natural Jen.” She giggled.28
Jen frowned,29
“What’s that supposed to mean?”.30
Meg smiled and squeezed her hand to reassure her.31
“Only that you’re the most expressive person I know. It’s extremely obvious by the look on your face if you want something.” Jen smiled.32
Meg stopped walking and Jen walked to a tree and sat down under it. Meg got ready with her camera and Jen stuck her tongue out at her.33
“Come on, real emotion. Sticking your tongue out at someone isn’t real emotion. Give me something real...errr...Show me how you look when we’re together...Breathless.” The both smiled.34
Jen leaned against the tree and closed her eyes. She pictured Meg in her arms and surprising her with a kiss. Jen put a hand up to her chest and neck and took a deep breath with her eyes still closed and her brow slightly furrowed. Meg snapped the picture.35
“That was awesome baby, very realistic!”36
Jen smiled, then thought of work. She looked down and tried to summon everything she felt about it. She looked up with a tear in her eye and a genuine depressed look about her and Jen snapped another picture.37
“Whoa, that was intense. Sure you’re ok, baby?”38
“Of course...I’m only posing. Was that ok?” she said in a slightly shaky voice but Meg didn’t catch it.39
“No, it was perfect. It just worried me was all.”40
Jen stood up and started walking through the leaves with her hands in her pockets looking down. Meg shot another pic and started to regain her enthusiasm. Jen ran to a bench and layed down giving the camera a sly look as she tried to look sexy. Meg laughed and shot apic. Jen grinned and Meg shot another one. Jen kept up the pace for half the day then declared they go back home. Meg agreed being satisfied with her pictures.41
When they got there they called the chinese place to have an early supper. An order of Princess chicken, fried rice, crab rangoon, hot and sour soup, and of course fortune cookies. They both walked together to pick up the chinese and Jen payed as she said she would. Meg practically ran home cuz the smell was driving her insane.42
As they were eating Meg voiced her thoughts,43
“I deem these little chinese cases ‘MAGIC’ chinese cases. They look soooo small. But then I have no idea how they get so much fried rice inside. It’s crazy!”44
Jen giggled at her and called her silly. Meg made a face and poked Jen in the side. Jen squeaked and twisted under Meg’s touch. Jen looked into Meg’s eyes and Meg cocked an eyebrow with a slight grin. Meg suddenly leaped out of her chair and over the coffee table, tackling Jen on the couch. She tickled her until Jen begged her to stop. Meg smiled at Jen and looked into her eyes. She suddenly became serious and planted a hard kiss on Jen’s lips. Jen kissed back. They stopped and peered into each others eyes. Meg was crying.45
“Baby, what’s wrong?” Jen said frowning.46
“You know I know something is wrong at work. Please tell me. I want to help. Whatever it is, you know we’re in this together. I can’t stand to see the look on your face when you think I’m not looking. I don’t want this to ruin you by keeping it inside. Please babe, I’m right here.” She hugged Jen. Jen had tears in her eyes47
“You remember that guy Joe, at work?”48
“Yeah, what about him?”
Author notes
umm, haven't finished it yet, I will soon, the ending isn't too bad, beings I never write endings.
Comments
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very good I did notice one typo though.......less.” The both smiled.34 the should be they but yeah the rest of my comment is going to be on part 2
*Blessed Be*
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Oh, come on! You just get going and then stop when she mentions this dude Joe. Unfair! Great story. I love the human angle to it. You write great characters.


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lol well, there's a second part to it
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WHAT THE HELL!?!?!?
WHO THE FUCK IS JOE!? AND WHAT THE FUCK DID HE DO TO JEN!? YOU LEFT ME THERE!?!?!?!? -
pretty cool, I really like your charactors. very much a real-life situation.
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Ooooo I lovedddd it! very Aha! The end was wonderful, and now I feel bad. But the story was soooo good! I like how you pointed out all the details about the faces they were making.
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GAH, this was so freaking good.
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haha, in a way, this kind of reminds me of you and me. ahem! >>"
but yeah, finish the ending would ya! I'm going to continue working on that girlfriend story I was writing. I hope you'll like it. I'll post the first part today. :]


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Wow I loved this you went into such detail on everything about the whole day I could just picture it in my mind so vividly how they was taking the photos. I would love to read more of this it's fantastic! I have to check out your other work
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lol, yeah, i keep meaning to post more..
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Very realistic. Every detail about the day is captured here. Yet another awesome read.
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thank you
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omg this f*ing amazing. i love it
i love how u described the scenerary *sp*
i could picture the two girls walking in the park
taking those pictures. it felt real. i love it,
RIGHT MORE lol

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lol, thanks so much and your encouragement is appreciated. I will write more, and I have sorta another story planned. If you want i'll let you know the update of this one and when the other story begins.
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i hope u do write more, even if it is another story. i loved how u created this one. i'm actually gettin ready to put a new story up too if u wanted to read it. i put on my favorites so i will continue to read more of ur work. i think u have some real talent
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i mean, i have an ending for this one, so i will. yeah, i'll check it out when you put it up. Thanks btw.
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