I hold no fear

I face the storm
And I hold no fear
For I fear not a gale
Nor the tempter's snare1

I am numb to all
And to nothing
For the pain made me man
Nor beast of flesh2

I call out in vain
And cry in silence
For I have none to answer
Nor any to fear3

I stand here
And I wish not
For silence
Nor the ever lasting oblivion4

I hold to nothing
And care not
For this will never cease
Nor will I ever get any reprieve

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  • Melissa Loves Jeffy
    December 27, 2007

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    This is a really great piece!!! Great description and detail. This is a write with really good wording. Keep writing and good luck in the contest. =)


  • Shiki
    December 27, 2007

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    Hmm a fearless description...of someone facing a big or great trouble with courage...you have definately captured that image well! Well done! A nicely written piece;D!