Aliens vs Predator 3 (new) part 9

Int. Room1

The room O’Rela and the marines have entered is a lounge-type area. There are couches, TVs and games consoles in here. A Predator fades into the room. It is the Predator hunting the rogue Predators. The Aliens start banging against the door. A marine is in front of the door. The Predator grabs his head and pushes him out of the way. The Predator opens the door and walks out into a flood of Aliens.2

Int. Corridor3

The Predator jumps up and takes his double combisticks out. He holds one in each hand and hits two Aliens in the head with it. He CUTS through the Aliens with his glaives and leaves only five standing. He heads towards the control room.4

Int. Room5

The five Aliens swarm in. They dodge the marines’ bullets. An Alien walks to a marine and bites the marine’s face off. Another marine shoots that Alien. O’Rela notices an Alien is running towards him. He shoots and a tiny bit of acid melts through a bit of his leg. He screams. The dead Alien falls on a marine. The marine is trapped on the ground. He manages to shake it off and shoots two Aliens, blowing them into fountains of acid. The remaining Alien pushes the TV towards O’Rela. A marine jumps in front and gets hit by the TV. He is unconscious. They try to kill the Alien but it circles the room rapidly. The Alien jumps out the door to dodge the bullets.6

O’RELA
Grab Hicks and take him to Control.7

Two marines grab the unconscious marine and they drag him out. 8

O’RELA
Let’s go.9

They exit.10

Int. Staircase11

The other marines are still going up. An Alien suddenly jumps in front of them. It is just about to head-bite them when, suddenly, it is shot by the Captain.12

CAPTAIN
Did you miss me?13

JEN
Not really.14

CAPTAIN
Shut it.15

We start to hear a motion tracker beeping.16

CAPTAIN
What the hell is that?17

A Eddie pulls out his motion tracker. 18

EDDIE
Something’s behind that door. And whatever it is, there’s about ten of them.19

CAPTAIN
Which level are we on?20

JEN
The second-to-last one. The control room is behind that door.21

CAPTAIN
(aims his gun at the door)
Jen, go open it. Go on. Ladies first.22

JEN
You always were an *bunny*.23

CAPTAIN
Language.24

She walks to the door and slowly opens it. We zoom into the door.25

Cut to:26

The captain’s eye through the gun scope. We zoom into it and cut back to:27

The door. Jen opens it fully and we see two marines jump out and aim their weapons at them.28

CAPTAIN
Hold fire!29

O’Rela walks out.30

CAPTAIN
O’Rela, get me a drink. Some coffee, or tea if we don’t have any. Or just water.31

O’RELA
The android will only talk with you.32

CAPTAIN
Who told you to touch the android.33

O’RELA
Seemed a good idea. We need to know how to kill these things.34

CAPTAIN
By the way, where’s Erickson?35

JEN
He’s gone to get his brother.36

CAPTAIN
Stupid son of a *bunny*.37

JEN
That’s exactly what I said.38

Int. Corridor39

Erickson grabs hold of Phil, helping him walk. They are walking in a very narrow corridor with no doors. 40

Fade to:41

A few seconds later. Erickson and Phil are closer to the camera.42

Fade to:43

More seconds later. They stop and we are looking at Erickson’s face. Behind him we see an Alien’s head lift up. We hear saliva dripping on the floor. We hear it’s footsteps and it’s hiss. We pull back as Erickson pushes his brother a few metres away from him.44

ERICKSON
Go!45

Phil pulls himself away with his arms. Erickson turns around to face the Alien. He aims his gun at it.46

Int. Control47

The captain and O’Rela watch the monitor. We do not see it but instead here the screams of Erickson. The captain turns it off. We get a quick view of the Alien lifting him up. 48

CAPTAIN
He’s gone. I’m sorry.49

O’RELA
He was a good soldier. Good friend. He did go over the top sometimes but that was what was good about him.50

CAPTAIN
We’ve lost a lot of people in the pass two hours. But none of them were this panful to watch.51

O’RELA
He should have run.52

The captain leaves.53

Int. Outside Control54

The captain walks into this corridor which the marines are guarding. The walks through the door at the end.55

Int. Comm. Room56

We see a man crashing everything in the room, radios, phone, computers, everything.57

CAPTAIN
Grey! What are you doing!?!58

The man, Grey, looks at the captain.59

GREY
Remember company rules.60

CAPTAIN
What?61

GREY
Company rules. 62

CAPTAIN
What about them?63

GREY
Preserve alien life forms for research. And you don’t seem to be obeying that.64

CAPTAIN
What do you mean?65

GREY
Two aliens were going to attack you, you pulled out a grenade and nearly killed you and the aliens. Just ten minutes ago, you killed one.66

CAPTAIN
Don’t worry. You’ll get your little alien. Just hope they don’t get you first. And when I mean YOU’LL get the alien, I do mean YOU.67

GREY
It’s not my job.68

CAPTAIN
It’s not my job either. I quit. 69

GREY
Then you’re a stow away and unfortunately, I’ll have to kill you.70

Grey takes out a pistol. He is suddenly shot in the head dozens of times by the captain’s machine gun.71

CAPTAIN
If you ever go crazy on my ship, I’ll kill you.72

The lights start to flicker. They turn off to show nothing but pitch black. A light suddenly appears. It is from the captain’s torch. It shines around the room showing nothing, we see a little bit of an Alien’s tail from behind a desk. The captain leaves.73

Ext. Outside Control74

The captain walks through the dark, torch shining, stepping on something. He shines his light it and we see it is a marine. The captain shines his light further and there are dozens of marines bodies. The only ones alive are Jen, O’Rela and Eddie.75

CAPTAIN
What happened?76

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  • Andy Stephenson gold member
    December 1, 2007

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    Well Written!

    Coming in on it late as I have, I didn't get the background needed to really understand what is going on. The ones alive at the end are the good guys? Thanks for entering my contest.

    Andy