The Apparition Man- Part Ten #

Chapter Three - Part Ten #1

After my mother left, first making sure that she was actually gone, I shut down my computer. Heading towards the bathroom. I would show her that I could do whatever the hell I wanted to.2

I had heard from one of the boys in the clinic, from my last stay, that if you mixed alcohol with sleeping pills it could be near death fatal, depending on how much you took. It supposedly lead to an overdose, where you would either die in your sleep, or if you weren't lucky someone would come in just in time to save you, just in time for you to have a fighting chance.3

I remembered telling my Mother upon my arrival back at home, and how the same boy had done it twice in an attempt to loose his life. It had been like a dagger, stabbing deep into the core of her back and right through her heart. It had repulsed her, and had mortified her, even though we both knew that there were more worse ways to kill yourself. Like I had read somewhere on the web once, there were a thousand different ways you could do something, it's whether you succeeded or failed at the attempt that was the most important thing.4

So with this in mind, I had an idea, one that would pay her back for saving my life. I knew that she kept most of her medication in the bathroom cabinet, it was stack full of pills, ones for health, one fore pain, one for illness and ones for random occurring lumps and bumps that she had to get rid of. I was like a candy shop, there were so many options, I just could not choose, and if I could not choose pretty soon, than I had no option than to use them all. Though that was it in itself, my genius plan, it was enough to content me for many months to come. This would get her for sure, and if it didn't I would be immensely surprised.5

I opened the bathroom cabinet, pulling bottles of the shelf, trying to hold as many as I could with both hands. I did not have a lot of time, ten, fifteen minutes at the most, but it was enough time for me to set up my prank, all I needed now was a bottle of alcohol. Now that was the hard thing. I hoped that it was still under the sink where dad had left it before he died, other wise I would have to walk all the way down to the basement to get some of his vintage collection bottles, well Grandpa's vintage collection bottles.6

I laughed at the thought, thinking if the alcohol didn't look like it had killed me, my Mother surely would, for cracking open a bottle of Grandpa's good stuff, the family heritage collection, now that would drive her to the brink of madness, though  wouldn't mind, it would be quite funny actually. I walked back into the bedroom, tipping the the pill bottles on my bed, then ran out into the kitchen to find the alcohol.7

My Mother had not touched a single drop since dad died, not even at Christmas or new years eve. Grandpa had convinced her to put most of the bottles down in the basement, so as not to be a constant reminder of my fathers addictions, but there were some bottles that she would not let anyone move, they were to stay under the kitchen sink, until we were old and Grey.8

Undoing the lock on the cupboard, I looked around quiet happy to see that the bottles had remained untouched. I pulled the nearest bottle out, checking the clock for the time. Yes there was still time, but not much. I locked the cupboard up, running back into my room, and unscrewed the alcohol lid of, letting the bottle sit open on my bedside table. After that I randomly picked a few pill bottles and placed them besides the alcohol for that added piece of decoration.9

Outside I heard a door shut, it had to be My Mother. Quickly I threw the other bottles onto the floor, jumping onto my bed. I closed my eyes, waiting for her return. It didn't take long though. I heard her walking towards my room. Squinting I opened my eyes just enough for e to see her in a blur.10

"Reidy, dinner is on the AH...," she screamed, throwing her handbag across the floor.11

I can not describe what her scream was like in to many words, only that it was like a cat who had just had it's tail wrenched of it's body.12

She quickly ran over to me, grabbing my arm, checking for a pulse. I could tell she had fallen for my prank hook, line and sinker, and I could not be more happier.13

I counted to Ten, awaiting the moment to spring it on her, One....Two...Three....Four...14

She brung her hand to me neck, resting it against my skin.15

Five....Six.... Seven...Eight....16

She must have felt a pulse, because she stood up, wrapping her arms around my waist.17

Nine...Ten18

"Reidy can you hear me baby."19

I opened my eyes, a small smile escaping my lips.20

"Happy late April fools Mother, " I said, not knowing anything else to say, and I didn't really need to, her expression was enough to say it all.21

I had twisted that fiery dagger of pay back. I had gotten my sweet revenge, and I was in Ecstasy as I watched her fall apart.22

She let go of me, looking at the bottle on the side of the table, she picked it up, taking a look at me, my eyes now widening in joy, as I looked up at her. My smile would not disappear.23

She let a few tears escape her sunken face, before taking a good swig of the alcohol, and once she had skulled at least a quarter of it, she placed it back on the bedside table, wiping her lips of her sleeve. She turned towards the door, and started walking. "Get out." she said, stepping into the hallway.24

I slid of my bed, following her into the kitchen, I had succeeded.

Author notes

The little voice in my head won't let me forget
The little voice in my head is never misled
All of this noise is what keeps me from making a mess
The little voice in my head just won't let me get with you

I know I sound insane, like I'm playing games
'Cause all I really want is you
But there are some things a girl won't do

Love these lyrics.... suited it well enuff !!!

Hoep you enjoyed .... more to come

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  • A turn for the worse

    The story is sort of going backwards here...drug and alcohol abuse might be good for one scene in a story, but this is just repetitive. Unless this is some sort of time-glitch part of the story that is taking place, then it's just repetition. Sorry!


  • Siby Anan
    July 7

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    Aww Reidy you are SICK! xD
    And I love you for it

    This really was a very interesting part. It made me laugh. It was a break from all the seriousness and the mysteriousness. I liked it. Very, very enlightening ^_^


  • Amicus2K8
    March 23

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    One cruel lil Beech!..

    ...and the writer has a twisted and perverted mind to create such a scene! Sighs...mean, mean, mean...never thought of writing from that aspect of a persons character, but no doubt, there are such people in the world...

    Quite a fantastic creation you have going here, boys whacking on grandma's, girl pretending overdose, black lace panties in the street, grins, the kitchen sink and more to come!

    A rollercoaster ride you are taking your readers on and I think you are enjoying the misery, grins...good for you!

    Hooked....

    Came here because you life a nice comment on my lil snippet about Spring. Didn't think I would get involved in such a long story, but the mood was right and so here I am. Probably done for the this sitting, but hope to return.

    Thank you for such an engaging yarn.

    regards...

    Amicus...


  • Mreynolds058
    March 23

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    Now that is really one below the belt from Reidy. I can safely say that you have created someone completely 100% out of it! The joy she feels from so badly breaking her own mother is so realisitically conveyed I actually felt sick. The need for revenge because her Mother saved her life is so sad you really do feel sorry for her.
    Well done. Fantastic read as ever


  • White Wydow
    February 4

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    OH MY GOD! THAt was so freakin funny I can almost feel the joy that she felt >_>


  • LadyLionnir
    January 17

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    Aw, this chapter made me think of Reidy as an evil little girl, lol. She was so cruel to her mother, but I suppose it's a fantastic way to twist your readers emotions. Make them confused: do I like this character or not? Do I sympathize for her? etc....Great work!!!


    • Intrepid
      January 17
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      SHE IS EVIL mwah ha ha ha ..lol no she's messed up arent we all lol...

      glad you liked my little twist..
      Keep reading..I know you will

      Love Blair ~


  • Lawliet
    December 6, 2007
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    ohh, that was SO mean x.x I cant help but feel quite horribly for the poor dear old mother. x.x


  • DarkOneShadow silver member
    November 28, 2007

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    Oh, cruel to the core

    While I understand that her mother loves her and wants her around... sometimes better to just let that person go... still to make her mother go through that... that is going to cause serious issues...

    DarkOne

  • frostany
    November 28, 2007

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    Reidy certainly has some serious issues, not that I'm a good person to judge whether someone has issues or not, but you can tell she's had a few too many things go wrong in her life.

    I wonder what exactly her mother did to make Reidy hate her so much, I've been finding myself feeling sorry for the mother and Reidy both at the same time.

    Your way of making the reader feel like they're actually there is awesome, that's what makes a really good writer.

    I really have been feeling like I'm right there in the middle of the dramatic scenes.

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