Shadows

Shadows hide my soul1

darkness surrounds my heart2

walking down the same dark path3

seeing nothing but pain and suffering4

only my light can help me

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  • Deamonhunter
    June 22, 2008
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    reminds me of a headach a got from a lime milkshake.


  • RegalAngel
    April 3, 2008
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    i liki chiki! guess who? lol


  • Bells Kelly
    November 28, 2007
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    i don't know whats going but i only got four or five lines looks good thoug!