Here I am. There I go. Here I am. Release me. Release me. Release me.1
Here I go. Where are you? Release me.
Author notes
My heart is crushed like sardines in a squashed tin box. My mind is crushed like sardines in a squashed tin box.
Everyone must read “The dark Tower” Series by Stephen King, “Don’t ask him silly questions, he won’t play silly games. He is just an awful choo-choo train, his name is Blaine the Pain.”
I think my down fall will by my male mind.
A contest entry
- Ten Minute -or less- Entries (You have ten minutes, don't ya?) by Taylor Renee.
350 points, ended December 15, 2007, 34 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - I Want STRONG Emotions!!! by I Dare to Dream.
900 points, ended January 24, 2008, 41 entries
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Comments
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This definitely has strong emotions of being lost confused, and maybe a slight hint of sadness. It wasn't enough to make me cry, but I enjoyed reading it and it was interesting! ^.^ Thanks for entering, and good luck!
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Amazing! I haven't read the others yet, but you can definitely feel that sense of being lost, sort of bordering on insanity kinda feeling. Very well done, and good luck!
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CONGRATULATIONS TYLER!!! *claps*
Now you *have* to write more.
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The repetition made me like it even more. This was really good, no wonder it's one of Tay's faves ^_^
You did an awesome job with this. It rocks
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Awww!!! This is really effective!
I hope you don't really feel like this. If you do, is there anything I can do to help you?
xo
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